Author: Jellykyu27, Greenvy23, Littlefanasies

Title: My Bestfriend's Promise

Reviewer: joker(junhyung-lover)

1. Poster(10) 9/10

The poster is really good actually:) I really liked the fact that Ryeowook and Siwon being minor characters are smaller than Donghae and the ulzzang being the main characters:) I deducted one mark because I think the wording's colour is a little off><

2. Title(10) 9/10

The title is really good:) I gave you full marks because you used the title to descibe the outline of the story without revealling anything. Also, the title is very original and unique. I really like it:) I think the different chapter titles of the story was also very revealing, so that was where the one mark was deducted from.

3. Plot (15) 14/15

The plot is more original then the others. I really liked it:) I deducted one mark because of the typical outline of "guy loses memory but girl still loves him".

4. Spelling and Grammar 13/20

There was quite a handful of spelling mistakes like "irritating" and not "irittating" and also quite a number of grammer mistakes. Also, try not to use Choi ____ . Why don't you just give the girl a name? It would be much easier for the reader and also for the writer. Quite a number of punctuation mistakes too. Try not to use excessive punctuation in the story, some readers might get irritated by it. You should also beware of the sentence structure.

5. Prologue/Trailer/Character Introduction (15) 12/15

Okay, the description was fine other than the last line which in my opinion reveals too much of the story. Ot would be better if you removed that line. The characters were fine but i think instead of putting all of the characters at once, you could have instead only put the MAIN characters in the foreword and slowly introduce the other people that appeared in your life.

6. Flow of the story (10) 8/10

The story made the readers want more because one chapter is really short. I also think that the story is a little draggy. For example one chapter should not be split into 2 parts. But, on the positive side, you controlled the flow of the progression well:)

7. Overall Enjoyment (20) 19/20

In total, i really liked the story and it was really cute. Donghae was really sweet and you know how to make the readers want to read on by twisting the plot here and there for effects! The sidestories were really sweet and it tied in with the story well^^

Reviewer Remarks: 

So, I really look forward to the ending of this story and good luck^^ It is a really good fic so continue with a sequel! Just make sure you edit your story before posting and you will be ready to go^^

Total: 84/100