Shoes of a Unicorn Writing Contest

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/541340

I entered this contest. Praying hard to win hehe. Please support me?
Constructive and honest critics are very much welcomed.

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A faithful organ. Pumping blood dutifully until its last beat to keep our knavish, treacherous, perfidious body alive.
Such a paradoxical combination - a beautiful one.

But isn't pain hidden in every beauty?

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/876971

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lovebreak
#1
I support you
fighting unnie ^o^
ButterflyShida #2
Good luck!
nursyamimivip
#3
goodluck ! ^^