Story title: Late Confession

Author: Dana2083

Reviewer: junhyung-lover

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title: 4/5

The title is really catchy and it really suits the story. I would have given it full marks but instead I deducted 1 mark because there are other stories that has the same title.

foreword/description: 8/10

The description was really short and revealed too much of the story. The foreword was really good but the last line ruined most of it as it revealed a little too much.

poster/background: 3/5 

The characters in the poster matched really well but I felt that it was a little too plain. Although the quote was really well written!

originality : 17/20

It wasn't a bad idea because not many stories are as angsty as yours. You actually took the risk to do a story with a sad ending. Most of them usually have a happy ending but your's was sad. I deducted 3marks because most stories are about girls being dumped or rejected by the guy. Although at first look at the story, most people would have thought that it would have a happy ending. I really liked the twist at the ending!^^

story flow: 6/10

I felt that the story progressed too quickly. When I was reading the first part, I did not expect the story to progress all the way till Sooyeon got married with Myungsoo. Even though it is a one-shot, I feel that you could have dragged it a little longer and not change the setting of the story so many times. 

vocabulary / grammer / spelling / punctuation: 16/20

There is not much grammer mistakes:) Although you did spell Minyoung's name wrongly a couple of times. Also, there were punctuation mistakes and you could have descibed the characters in greater detail.

description( how was the story written):  7/10

Like i said previously, it progressed too quickly but on the positive side, it was quiet well developed. You thought beyond the girl being dumped and actually make Minyoung regret and hurt even more by adding in Myungsoo and Sooyeon's wedding in! The story was really well planned!:)

overall: 18/20

I enjoyed the story very much! Without many majoy hitches and bumps, you made it to the end:) Whatsmore is that this is your first fanfic/oneshot and it was good!:)

total: 79/100

Good shot at your first fanfic/oneshot! I really look forward to them and wish you luck!

junhyung-lover