Okay..

So this is the first one not random and not about my personal life. Sorry... But I was thinking of writing this for a story for a short story for school.. About A little 13 year old girl who masks her feelings under a happy mask, But she really isn't happy all the time (sort of like me sometimes). She acts happy because she can't trust people easily... And she is scared of what people will think...

And she even hides it from her Big brother, but not that she doesn't trust him, but because she knows he will worry..

But.. I'm stuck.. I tried asking my big brothers.. But they don't answer.. They are to busy.. with school (2 of them) and 3 of them are at work right now.. So I don't know who to ask..

But I want to ask everyones Opinon...

What do you think... Do you think this story is to clinched? (Not That I'm going to post it on here... Unless My teacher likes it first before I post it here, qoutev.com or Wattpad.)

And What if you saw your little sister/ Brother sad and they been hiding it from you would you do something about it?

>.< And sorry for my randomness lately..

-Zeldamato12 :)