Title: [5/5]  The title goes with the rest of the story and works well with it in the long run.

Graphics: [5/5] The background and poster aren't clashing. They're also both there and customized for the story.

Foreword & Description: [10/10] Just enough is said to get the reader interested without giving away the plot, and links are given to everyone who helped with the story along with how they helped which is nice for any readers who want to request something from one of the shops.

Plot: [20/20] There is a LOT of plot for the size of the story, and it's enjoyable because it keeps the story interesting.

Characterization: [10/10] Each character has their own personality which is well shown throughout the story. They also make sense together because there are no obvious major personality clashes.

Originality: [5/10] While parts of the storyline are definitely original, there has been a recent resurgence of stories like this one where one member of EXO or another finds love, looses it in some way, and either the EXO member or the person they loved has to start dealing with the loss.

Flow: [10/10] It seems almost like there are jumps from one place to another, but they are well tied in in a way that makes them work with each other.

Grammar & Spelling: [20/20] Congratulations, no grammar or spelling errors!~

Overall Enjoyment: [3/5] It was a great story, but there are many like it being published now. The story on its own would definitely be a 5, but it is here at a time where there are far more than there have been in the past. More like these mean more that people want reviewed which means reviewers like me see more of them.

Bonus points: [5/5] It's been way too long since I saw a story with 0 grammar and/or spelling errors. For that you have my thanks.

Final Points : [93/100]