Hi! I don't know if you read my fanfic but it seems to be a general consensus among those who have left their comments that it is confusing. I don't really know whether they mean confusing it-makes-me-think or confusing it-is-so-bad-I-should-stop.

I have to admit that my writing style is very different and maybe I am writing for the wrong audience. But I did not want to undermine my audience's capacity to comprehend.  If any of you here reads it can you please help enligten me.

I too am confused.