Revenge #3

Okay, so I just wanted to ask you guys something. I feel like I have confused some stuff in the story. The characters' feelings and characters for example. I feel like I have totally mixed up their feelings and stuff like that and I'm afraid that I'm confusing you >_<

I would appreciate it if some of you could tell me your opinion so that I can finally let go of the matter. Gosh, it's been eating away at me for quite a few days now...

If you don't want to or are too lazy to give me your opinion, I'm sorry for wasting your time. If you comment in the box below, thank you, thank you soooo much!!! <3 <3

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AmNiRo18 #1 Jul 3, 2014 19:08:37

I personally think everything is flowing well. There is nothing really confusing. I agree with minho13 it's just character growth and the story continues to grow as well and it keeps getting more intriguing. I'm always excited for the next chapter! I think you're over thinking the story too much because you want to do so well but don't stress out too much because you're doing an amazing job :) author-nim FIGHTING!!!!

minho13 #2 Jul 2, 2014 15:27:08

I feel that all the characters personalities and feelings really fit. No one is suddenly switching personalities. Leo and N seem different as the story goes on, but it feels like character growth. And Ken has some past stuff that he's dealing with so I don't think he counts either. I think you are doing a great job with the characters!!!

Xandara #3 Jul 2, 2014 10:22:24

Where exactly did you feel that it is confusing?
In my opinion, it all fits together.

im_sucks_LOL #4 Jul 2, 2014 09:32:24

why always me