Reviewer: TwiceAzeline

STORY TITLE: Bittersweet

By: thegaemgyu

STORY TITLE- 4/5
Angst? Drama? Romance? Your title definitely screams all three genres, and it is definitely relevant to the story. It's not original, nor is it extremely attractive, but I think that it has a really deep link with the story.

CHARACTERIZATION- 15/15
Your characters start off with personalities like most teenagers, but they grow as time passes which is very realistic. The OC is the one who tries to salvage their relationship even though, inside her, she knows that their love is no longer there. We only see the OC's side of the story so I am not that sure about how Kyuhyun feels, but I can already see that he has changed a lot. People's feelings change overtime, and I am glad that at this story, both parties have mutual feelings about it.

POSTER/GRAPHIC- 2/5
The image on your poster doesn't scream angst, drama or romance. It is not extremely attractive either, but it is quite pleasing to the eye.

PLOT- 22/25
I love how you compare a bubblegum and a relationship, because the impact you give to your readers is stronger. I LOVE the ending as well. If this is a happy ending, I don't think it will fit the story at all. I also feel that the story is as good as it is. There is no need for any other sequels. As for the themes... I think there are quite a lot, actually. Sometimes, we cannot have everything in our lives. For our careers, we have to give up love. For love, we have to give up our careers. Love is not everything in the world too, because it can't feed a family. This is certainly believable and realistic.

READERS' RESPOND- 4/5
You have quite a number of responses, but it still needs some more love especially for such a great story :)

CONSISTENCY- 10/10
Really smooth. I have nothing else to say.

GRAMMAR/ WRITING STYLE- 24/25
I love your writing style and I cannot spot any major mistakes. I notice mostly punctuation mistakes which can be fixed pretty easily.

OVER-ALL ENJOYMENT- 9/10
I really love your story. It is really realistic and it is pretty hard to find such a wonderfully written story in Asianfanfics. I nearly teared up too, and I am quite a sadist so yeah <.>

Total - 90/100

Thank you so much for reviewing my story!