Light- explanation

HAI EREBODAY!! i wrote a new story and im DYING to explain it!! if you havent read my new story heres the link :3

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/738068/light-sad-drabble

please read it >w<

anyway, heres how it goes

the dust is floating around them and stuff, it represents the present world, the mortal world

the light represents..... you know what. (and if you dont know, death)

the boy is dying, he is always about to go and is always curious about the light but the other boy wants him to stay

he knows the boy is dying and is trying to hide his sadness...

the boy knows that he knows but is trying to stay cheerful

when he drags the boy out to the field it was him helping the boy try to stay alive and see the world longer

the wind signifies that hes going to go

the boy apologises because he is going

he says not to be because he knew he couldnt take the boy away from his fate

the boys breath catches with the wind..... he takes his last breath

the second to last two lines are pretty cheesy. i wanted to make it that he died too (by suicide or something) but i couldnt TT^TT

he says yes because thats his answer to the questions the boy asked earlier

he says hes sorry because of the mistakes he had made and for being stupid in the beginning of the story.

 

i hoped you enjoyed this as much as i did writing it X3

i needed to let it all out :D

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