ForeverRainbow's Of Sunflowers and Blood Red Poppies

Title [5/5]

Your title entices me to read the story, because of its originality, and it gave me a chill vibe when I read it.

Appearance [5/5]

The poster and background fit the story perfectly; it's not too flashy or too simple.

Description/Foreword [14/15]

The description is perfect, enough said. It captivated people to read the whole story.

The foreword

Plot/Characterization [27/30]

Even though the plot is pretty common, you delivered it with such beauty. It's a shame that the story is just a drabble, but then again, it's already perfect as one. The characters are also already perfect the way they are; the mysterious Amie who understood Sunflowers and Blood Red Poppies perfectly and the love struck Niel who wanted Amie for the rest of his life.

Grammar/Spelling [30/30]

You have no grammatical and spelling errors. You also have a great choice of words. 

Flow [10/10]

I love the way you started the story with a memory about Amie explaining the reason behind Sunflowers and Blood Red Poppies then continued with the present where Niel had to face the fact that Amie was going. It's short but not rushed.

Overall Enjoyment [5/5]

I really enjoyed reading your story. The way you wrote it in a poetic kind of way gave me a chill vibe and made me relate to both Amie's and Niel's character. The story is purely enjoyable.

Total [96/100]