The Prince's Butler (Chapter 3) [PROOFREAD]

 

The Prince's Butler

 

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Chapter 3

 

 

Donghae's POV

I knocked on the wooden door a couple of times, waiting for a respond.

"Come in!"

Hearing the annoyed voice, I smirked. I really should give my thanks to this spoiled rascal, as he's the cause of my incoming luxury. I can't wait to have a thick wad of cash in my hands. I really can't wait, but my current problem is, how in the world am I supposed to 'tame', as said by Mr. Lee, this Eunhyuk guy's father. Spank his ? No. Like duh.

I entered his room and I can say, my eyes are satisfied with the sight in front of me. A lean milky white body with defined abs was served right in front of my eyes. I swallowed a gulp of saliva, trying to pull my rebellious eyes from staring at Eunhyuk's (that's his name, right?) body lustfully.

After Eunhyuk pulled a white oversized tee over his head, he looked at me, from the top of my head to my feet. He approached me, taking his own sweet time, making my heart beat nervously. As soon as he was in front of me, he placed his head near my left ear, take a not so deep breath, and finally said, softly in his y, husky voice,

"Eww, you stink. Please go and take a shower and change into those set of clothes on my bed. I'm going to take you to somewhere to change that super untidy image of yours. Get me? Ugh. The smell,"

He made a face, like 'Oh, I'm dizzy', rolled his eyes and made his way out of his room.

Eunhyuk's POV.

I was trying my best to keep a straight face while searching for a t-shirt, as I feel the delinquent's eyes roaming lustfully, looking at my perfectly defined abs. What is he looking at? Oh, my gosh. I immediately regretted letting him in my room while I'm dressing up. I could feel an arousing heat of sensation travel to several parts of my body. My face burning hot and I could feel my ears going all red. I'm lucky enough, the current lighting in my room is very dim, preventing Donghae from seeing me blush, embarrassed as he keep on staring at my half body. I quickly pulled a shirt over my head. In order to eliminate the awkward silence in the room, I approached him, deciding to before quickly getting out of my room and wait at the living room instead.

After waiting for almost half an hour, Donghae came out from my room, his hair not very neat, as usual, with my set of clothes on him walking towards me.

"Hey. I'm ready. Erm, Lets go." he said, awkwardly.

I stood up, examining him from head to toe, and I can't help but notice a couple of red marks, love bites or what they call hickeys, on his neck and along his well-define collar bone, as my shirt he's wearing is a bit low-cut. I felt like dragging him back in my room, grab a scarf and wrap it around that neck of his, but I restrained myself from doing so, to prevent any misunderstandings. Instead, I decided to just ignore it, and proceed to our destination; the mall.

Donghae's POV

Why is he glaring at my neck like a ert? Oops. My hickeys from the night I got drunk, after making out with some skinny, cheap bimbos and probably even bimboys, before getting dragged here, in this luxurious house, stucked with Mr. Well-Defined-Abs, as his brand new butler. Erm, this is friggin' awkward. I pulled a poker face to pretend i did nothing wrong.

We got into his car, not a limousine, just a nice "humble" car (compared to the flashy limo), even though it’s still a very posh one and headed to the mall. Once we reached our destination, Eunhyuk led the way, and I followed him from behind, not sure of his objective of taking me here. A makeover, I guess? I honestly think that my style is not that bad. What's his problem? Oh, yah. He's my young master. Well, whatever that suits him best.

We entered and exit into one designer-selling-items shop and the best thing is, we never exit the shop empty handed. There are already more than five big paper bags containing all the designer items: shoes, trousers, tops, hats, shades, and many others. Ralph Lauren, Hugo boss, Adidas etc. It was a lie, if I said I wasn't enjoying myself. I feel rich for the very first time. I was smiling, grinning real wide. Until we reach the final station, the hair salon.

"Eunhyuk ju-in-nim (Young Master), what are we doing here? May I know, please?"

He gave me an expression that says “Duh”, pulled me in, had me sitted with his strong hands on my shoulder, holding the struggling me down, and whispered something to the hair stylist. I heard something like 'neat' and 'fashionable'. Eunhyuk remove his hands from my shoulder, bend slightly down, place his lips beside my ears and whispered,

"Please be a good boy. I want you to look good if you're going to be my butler. Feel honored."

And without waiting any longer, the hairstylists snip the think bush of hair on my head. When she finished, I looked at myself in the mirror. Hair neatly spiked up, trimmed and slightly layered. Well, I have to say, I don't look bad at all, like how I've imagined it. I sort of like my new hair. Touching my new styled hair, I smiled. I looked at Eunhyuk through the mirror reflection, and saw his satisfied expression. The stylist brushed the thick fallen hair off me and I stood up. Eunhyuk settled the payments while I waited for him outside the salon.

"Ok, lets go back home. We have lots to accomplish." He smiled.

He smiled, for the first time.

 

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You should really do something about spaces...xD

You had minor spelling mistakes, that's a relief.

BUT WAIT! You posted an emoticon. That's TABOO.

You can't post an emoticon! NEVER. 

Emoticons are for chatting online and texting only.

And also, when you point something out, don't make them capital like this : CAPITAL

Intead, put their font in Italics, like this : Italics

 

Example : 

He's really handsome.

 

And, when you post korean words (or any otherr language besides English) put them in Italics.

Anyway, I'll post Chapter 4 tomorrow. or maybe not. I suddenly became busy. XD

 

 

THE STORY IS NOT MINE. I JUST PROOFREAD IT. 

STORY BELONGS TO MsHanee95. 

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