Title : 3/5
Although it does relate to the story, it's too cliché, a bit too common. Bland. You name it.

Description/Foreword : 3/5
It's so-so. Honestly you gave your story away in the description, really wasn't enticing. Though I think you could've done better to make it stand out.

Grammar : 5/5
Honestly, I've got nothing to point out. All sentences were good. Usage of punctuation marks weren't abused or used in a wrong way.

Characters : 4/5
I've got nothing to oppose on, except on this one little thing. Their characteristics seem too cliché, too typical, you know? Their characteristics are pretty common to other typical couples in stories who one of them loses his/her memory, and clearly doesn't remember a thing about his/her lover, etc. Nothing stood out about them.

Flow : 4/5
It was pretty much okay though, so I've got nothing to oppose on.

Plot : 3/5
It's pretty common, that's why. These amnesia fics like yours is pretty common here, that sometimes I kind despise those fics, not unless there's some twist within the story. And as I said like before, I believe that you could've done more to make it stand out.

Enjoyment : 6.5/10
Pretty obvious why I didn't enjoy it much, right? Though I must say, it's pretty decent, actually more decent than some of the other amnesia fics I've read before.

Overall score : 7/10

Note : Don't take some of my words literally to heart. I just said those to somehow help you (: