Story tittle; Of sunflowers and blood red poppies | Author; foreverrainbow

tittle: (4/5)
The tittle is relevant to the story,since your story is almost all about sunflowers and red poppies, but my first inpression of the tittle was dull and angst.
since,it said blood red poppies,the first thing that came in my mind was angst & sad. but when i saw the tittle,I also thought there should be a
meaning in the tittle,i could really feel the angst. i would Definitely click on it.  and it is original,yup.

Appearance (5/5) 
the poster and background did relate to the story,however niel's picture wasn't really clear. but it's just something i realized..
the layout was readable,and the font was too. the forward was filled with credits and it was,just perfect! but i do wanna suggest that you'd colour the credit links
in another colour. for example, navy blue? but you didn't colour it at all,and it looked good!

Description/Foreword (10/15)
The description is really intresting and clear. it shows that the girl in this story is cursed and has a short life,
while niel is healthy in the otherhand. 

Plot/Characterization (21/30)
The plot was believable,and it wasn't really the most original. I've seen alot more other 'the boy loves the girl
but she will soon die' fics—but i still enjoy them. and the characters are well developed,one suffering and one healthy. 

Grammer/ Spelling (20/30)
the tense(s) isn't very consistant..in a good way! Words are properly used in regards to tone and mood.. yup,they were fine.
Your choices of words were good,there weren't any typos i saw and, there were proper punctuations used. 

Flow (10/10)
The story was consistant with its plot,the characters weren't too consistant with their given personalities and it wasn't too fast,
nor slow.. which was,perfect! and it is believable,yes. 

Overall enjoyment (4/5)
[dear author, this may be biased; yuup] 
I really liked your story! it was one of the best i've read. Yes,I'll read it again—my favorite part of the fanfiction was the ending..
though it was sad that the girl was dead,i just liked it. What can you do to improve your story; well,First of all it was really good. but
you could improve it alittle,like adding a short parrigraph on how niel carries on with his life,etc. Additional comments; oh god,as i mentioned
ontop,This was one of the best fanfiction i've read.

Total (92/100)