The Prince's Butler (Description and Chapter 1) [PROOFREAD]

 

The Prince's Butler

 

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A butler is defined as the chief manservant of a rich household.

An ultimate clean freak young master, releasing excessive tough-y-guy vibe, who's confident enough he's straight (as he enjoys adult-rated movies), acting all snobbish and arrogant as he's sick of being friends with the other students in his school, whom he thought only want to be friends with him for the sake of his dollars and such, dismissing every single personal butler hired by his filthy rich father as they are just not organized enough for him, Lee Hyuk Jae aka Eunhyuk.

An enjoying-his-life-to-the-fullest guy, dating both males and females as he wished, expressing an affectionate attitude towards almost everybody, especially males. A currently school drop-out. Working as a part timer in the day to obtain cash in order to party at night(and also for his family's expenses. Until one day, he's randomly selected by a man who's in a gleaming black Limousine, while he's lurking in the streets at night, drunk, to be Eunhyuk's personal butler, Lee Dong Hae aka Donghae.

 

Chapter 1

 

 

Eunhyuk's POV

 

Is this the new school I'm gonna be enrolled to?

Oh my gosh! So much for having a rich father, enrolling you in a school with this kind of standards.

Dirty unscrubbed floors, windows with dust accumulating at the ledges, tables and chairs in a small stuffy classroom, vandalized with markers, scrapped with penknifes, arranged in a very "orderly" manner. In other words scattered all around the classroom, some overturned, instead of being in neat rows like those in my previous school. Blackboards with artistic graffiti drawn on it. (Well its the ONLY thing I can compliment on.) I dragged my feet along the corridors, wearing a disgusted expression on my perfectly good looking face all along.

Suddenly, BAM!

The sound produced when someone slammed a door. I saw a chocolaty-blonde haired guy heading towards my direction, with an angry expression, after exiting from the principal office. Wait! Did he just slammed the door of the Principal—and I mean the Principal's office—close? I was slightly shocked, with my mouth slightly agaped. That was extremely fresh to me. That never ever occurred in my luxurious, elite school, where everyone were all acting classy(and rebelling can't be classified under classy).

Okay, back to the delinquent.

The furious chocolaty-blonde haired delinquent, with clenched fist, stomping in my direction and before I'm able to avoid him, his shoulder hit mine, hard enough for me to fall back. Without apologizing, he left me on the ground, annoyed. My hands were already covered with a layer of grayish-black material, which I supposed ,would be dust.

This is dirty and I, Lee Hyuk Jae, hates having dirt on any part of me.

"This guy is so dead."

 

Donghae's POV

 

This is so unreasonable. I already told this people who don't deserve to be in a place called school, it wasn't me who made love in the school's library. Yeah, I might be the type of person who comes to school with hickeys on my neck and flirting is my forte. However, in the school compound totally isn't my thing.

"Lee Dong Hae, stop denying it. The janitor in charge of the library saw a piece of bra lying on the floor and harden seminal fluid were detected on bookshelves and some books. We all know you are the only student capable of doing that considering all your past records and those hickeys currently on your neck as evidence to your offense. Are you going to confess?" the principal accused me.

Damn. Why have in the library when you can do it in a motel.

"Its definitely not me,” I started, “Fine. You don't need to expel me. I officially expel myself. I quit!" I said

I opened the door, slammed it shut and head towards the stairs, leading to the backdoor exit. As I was making my way there, furiously, I accidentally hit a robust, sturdy shoulder. Without apologizing, I proceeded. I could clearly hear the guy I accidentally hit say,

"This guy is so dead."

 

Eunhyuk's POV

 

After the short tour around the school compound and after being hit accidentally by a pain-in-the- delinquent who got my hands dirty,(eww) and after the school bell rang a couple of minutes after the little scene I witnessed at the corridor nearby the principal office, I headed towards my new classroom, located at the 3rd floor. I climbed up the stairs lazily, complaining, again, why this school doesn't have an elevator. Once I  reached my class, I was being introduced to my new classmates. I was instructed to the seat at the back of the class as it was the only empty seat vacant.

"Okay, class, besides having a new student here, I have another announcement. For your information, and I'm sorry to say, Lee Dong Hae had just been expelled. So you will no longer see him in class. Class president, please cancel his name from the class attendance list. Now, lets proceed with Mathematics."

The class president, seating at the front right hand corner, did as he was instructed. Mathematics proceeded smoothly as I had no trouble answering the sums and problems. After completing the questions, I was thinking whether I should make some friends during break time as I don't want to be alone for the next couple of months I'll be here. Then, I started to realize, that I was one of the few who paid close attention to the lesson, while the majority others, were whispering and passing notes to each other while staring at me.

Oops, Correction. Staring at my designer shoes, posh school bag, branded watch, and classy hairstyle. Right, Maybe I should just forget it. Eyeing my branded goods, I see. You lowly class fellas. I know I'm rude.

After class, I headed straight back home, riding the public transport, as I was forbidden to take the car. I arrogantly ignored all the "Want to be friends?".

When I reached home, I headed straight to my room, forsaking my father's scoldings (regarding me dismissing another poor butler) because he digs his nose and thinking that I would not notice his actions, he sticks it on the walls of my room secretly.

Terribly disgusting.

He ended up being fired.

When am I going to get a new, clean, fast enough and almost perfect butler?

God knows when.

 

Donghae's POV

 

Yeah. No more school. I told my mom about it. She showed no dramatic reactions. She knows me too well. I will never do well even if i were to go through 10 years of highschool. Why is that so? I hate studying, simple. I prefer running around,n ot literally on my two feet but on my bike, delivering jajangmyun, ramyun and many other delicious orders, cleaning toilets in malls, serving customers as a waiter in a samyupsal stall etc, rather than sitting in a classroom, drooling on a book I have never take an effort to read.

After my delivery part time job, I'm off to the night club. Partying!

After a tiring week  of delivering, cleaning and serving. I'm so going to enjoy myself.

 

Eunhyuk's father’s POV

 

Oh man. It’s already close to midnight. I still have not found a suitable and perfect enough butler for my one and only spoiled brat at home and I'm tired. If I fail to bring back a butler, he will think that I gave up on him. No, that won't be the case. I have no other choice.

"Stop the car." I ordered.

The car immediately stop by a street. I rolled down the window and looked around. My eyes caught a figure of a man swaying from left to right, walking unsteadily—drunk. I observed his appearance. Eunhyuk will dislike this. He's not only un-classy looking, he's also a drunkard. Well, let's give it a try.

"Mr. Park, go and fetch that drunken man wearing the red shirt and black tight jeans. He's going to come with us."

 

 

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Here, I edited it. You had minor spelling mistakes but your grammar was good. :D

Just remember to use capital "I", okay? You use "i" often.

and also, space! You must space sentences. Do not bundle them up and make them connected. :)

It's a good story~ I'll proofread other chapters.

Updateee~ :D

 

 

THE STORY IS NOT MINE. I JUST PROOFREAD IT. 

STORY BELONGS TO MsHanee95. 

 

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