Hey guys,

well... i need an editor. someone to REALLY critique my writing.

i am writing a new piece, but no matter who i show it to all i get is "i like it"

i need someone to really tell me what is wrong with it (because i know there is a lot wrong with it).

is there anyone here willing to be mean and really critical of my writing? i love that. please!

i would love to hear some real feed back about my writing other than just that people like it. 

i know that is weird, but when i know things are wrong with it, and i dont know what is awkward, what needs to be changed or what i can work on... 

it kinda discourages me. i like it when people are bluntly honest?

please please, if you are willing to be my evilness to critiques my horriblness, please message me ^^ 

thank you.