I had to write this for english class what do you think?

As the cold wind blew through her hair,

He walked by stealing a glance.

That glance was all it took,

 For they were in love at first sight.

All he could think of was her,

All he would dream about was her.

As the bright sun shined down upon him,

She took a glance.

That was the day where it all started.

Love was in the spring air,

But so was hatred.