I wrote the English lyrics to A-pink's 'So Long' in my free time, and I wanted to know how it is. Could somebody help me by letting me know how it is?

Here are the lyrics! :)

 

 

I remember how we were so young and small

You and I 

Do you remember?

 

We were inseparable, our friends would get jealous

Of us,

Do you remember?

 

You held my small hand and stood right by me.

You were the one who always smiled at me.

Baby, we did not know back then

We were so naive and innocent

We were too young back then 

 

But one day, you came to me, into my heart

I started seeing you as something more than a friend

Next to you , I hid my heart, with all my might

Standing behind as just a friend

That I came yo despise so.

 

Do you reminisce of those days sometimes

Like I do?

Do you remember?

 

The nice breeze, so pleasing

The warm sunlight that was shining on us

Do you remember?

 

You and I are alike in many ways

That is why you are my precious friend

Baby, that is what I believed

But then you started coming to me

And , oh God, it was so strange.

 

But one day you came to me, into my heart

I started seeing you as something more than a friend.

Next to you, I his my heart, with all my might

Standing behind as just a friend

That I came to despise so

 

Honestly, I was so afraid

To stand in front of you

With my trembling heart.

 

Actually, I hated you for acting all cool

Why don't you try to know my heart now?

 

Feel me, feel me , tell me , tell me , love me , love me 

(Even though its too late now)

Feel me, feel me, tell me , tell me , love me , love me

(Even thought its too late now)

 

One day you came to me, into my heart

I started seeing you as something more than a friend.

Next to you I hid my heart with all my might

Standing quietly next to you

As a friend who you treasured so.