I need help on one of my most failing stories yet: Prometheus

ok so hey guys gdlover29 here and i just wanted to put out there that i am failing on one of my stories prometheus. Its an alien type sy-fy stort about a human taemin and an alien girl from another plant belinda. So long story short taemin travels to her plant and they soon fall in love but trouble sets in as it always does in every story. So far thays all i have and sp i need more help i havent even started i swear i deleted all the chapter except the foward so you guys could see whos in it. Check it out and please comment or message me for ideas  

 

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Elayasia #1
I like the story plot. Keep it the way it is. It's very sci-fi specially with alien an human falling in love. I like that. Now tell me what's the general things you worry about, so unnie can really give more help on?