2ne1 fans... help me out?

Hey, everyone! In my zombie story, the 2ne1 girls are performing at the rescue center and I have them singing the unplugged version of "Come Back Home" off their new album (because I love that last track so much!). I already posted the chapter and have their parts written out, but I labeled their parts myself by ear. I was hoping you all can check what I have here to make sure that it's right. It's just that Minzy's voice really matured a lot since their last album and I'm not used to it. Anyway, if you see any corrections, let me know and I'll edit my chapter to reflect those changes. Thanks!

EDIT: There was some conflicting information online (with some websites crediting Minzy's parts as Dara's, and others crediting CL's rap as Minzy's, which is why I just decided to label it myself based on what I heard in this song... but it looks like, according to the comments I received on this blog post, that those sites were wrong as I had suspected and that what I wrote below is right? ^_^

CL:
One two three you left me
But I hear your breath from somewhere
 
Minzy:
Once again, four five six
Red tears fall down
I miss your scent that embraced me
 
Dara:
You said this was all for me
Like a lie, you coldly turned around
Why? Why? You’re gone away
 
Bom:
Come back home, can you come back home
Don’t leave me at the end of the cold world
But come back to my side
 
CL:
Come back home, can you come back home
I’m pushing back all the pain
I’m still waiting for you like this
Now you gotta do what you gotta do
 
Minzy:
I hate you for not answering
I wonder if you’ll miss me sometimes too yeah
 
CL:
I’m trapped in a time without you
I can’t see ahead, I’m so scared
 
Dara:
The many days that are unfinished
It seems like they’ll be waiting for us
Where are you? Where? Too far away
 
Bom:
Come back home, can you come back home
Don’t leave me at the end of the cold world
But come back to my side
 
Minzy:
Come back home, can you come back home
I’m pushing back all the pain
I’m still waiting for you like this
Now you gotta do what you gotta do
 
CL:
The only thing left here is your shadow
My longing for you tortures me more than my lonliness
Seems like I can catch the sound of your laughter
But the moments weakly scatter like a sand castle
Every night, I get nightmares
Even in my dreams, I call out your name
In a time where everything changes, the one thing that doesn’t change
Is that I’m your queen, you’re my ruler
 
Bom:
Come back home, can you come back home
Don’t leave me at the end of the cold world
But come back to my side
 
Minzy:
Come back home, can you come back home
I’m pushing back all the pain
I’m still waiting for you like this
Now you gotta do what you gotta do

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clminzydarabomlover #1
yup its all right ....
you're so good...
nclmzy #2
I think you got everything right
Jenduekie #3
you can also research
cindysu15
#4
Eonnie,that's correct!But if you wanted to check the truth,you just check on wwww.kpoplyrics.net .Trust me,they translated it perfectly!^^
jadelyn #5
yup :) that's ryt authornim :)
xHyperBunnYx #6
Yup yup ! ^^
queenkiz #7
Yup.. That's right..
Jisoonator
#8
Correctttttt XD :)
L-Mos_World
#9
You are correct
Applebloom #10
It's correct :))) author I love your story btw!! It's daebak!!!
4evervipkissme #11
Perfect ^.^ I swear, I love the unplugged version so much. It shows to all the haters who say 2NE1 can't sing. Their voices are so beautiful in this song.
leenaeun
#12
I got no problem there, everything is just fine :D
Nevieforever0925
#13
It's great ^ ^ I really love it and I love there voices you don't need to change anything on it.