Feedback please (:

So like Im writing a new fanfic thats going to be a TRUE story but idk if yall like it.

So heres a teaser...

Hana and Jinyoung met each other while roleplaying and became a couple after a few days. As days passed by, both of them started becoming busy and couldnt be able to go online as much and when they were available, their different timezones didnt help at all. One day, Hana started noticing that she really missed him as if he was really her boyfriend. Then after a month without talking, Jinyoung finally comes back online and Hana confesses to him. What will happen to this young couple?

Is it okay? Please give me feedback thanks!

and also please help me, idk if i should confess or not either orz

 

STORY IS NOW UP PLEASE CHECK IT OUT THANKS

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/667385

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Wonachan
#1
Eh, the idea is ok...you should be more descriptive...that's all...
vaeliselva #2
yes,i love it c: it will be a wonderful story