My Online Boyfriend update #2

So I've been thinking about this a lot.. during the month of November was my story stress month lol. 
Well, not real stress compared to school work or something, but just stress as in I-screwed-up-the-plot-holy-crap stress. ^^

 

So you (to M.O.B's subscribers obviously) know the plot already. Key and Hanna met online, then met in real life, then theres's Jiwook and Ri In. 
 

I realized that I kind of messed up the whole reason to why I wrote the fiction. 

 

Really, it's supposed to be a fanfic of only Key and Hanna talking on chat and as the story progresses it shows the reality of Hanna and the reality of Key and how they debate if they should meet. Ri In and Jiwook still interfere with their lives still. But the whole story goes on about them just chatting with coincedentally meetings as they pass each other in stores or malls, etc without knowing it was each other. Towards the end they meet and I was going to write an Online Boyfriend story part 2. Depending on how long the story goes. 

 

What I have been writing so far is that they meet on chat, but they already met each other in real life so suddenly and it just got off topic to the main plot and everything. 

IDK I screwed up xD The story's going pretty well actually, I'm just surprised that I made Hanna and Key meet up so soon. They weren't supposed to yet T-T 

I guess I got caught up with their relationship I've been dying to put them together so I can add in the suspense of the two and more twists and all those mishaps and all the good stuff lol. So, I'm slowing down their meetings and won't make them date just yet. Did I make it obvious that they're gonna date? .. I don't know I hope I didn't. x) That wasn't a spoiler right...? Because I talked about hanna (you) dating Key in the foreward.. 
 

Oh wells, it's too late anyways. I'm already in the 20 ish chapters, it's not like I can delete it all and re write. .__. that'd be one gigantic pain if I had to re write everything again. e_o

Haha, so I just wanted to tell you guys what was supposed to happen and what really happened x)

Kay, well I'm updating a chapter write now and hopefully it will be posted tonight. 

Pssst! It will be about Key chasing Hanna and later see her and Jiwook while they're on their 'date' and it's a chapter all about Key and Hanna and Shinee meeting and HAH I spoiled it for you! Muahahha!

Just kidding that wasn't technically a spoiler.. 

The spoiler alert is that Key kissed Hanna and Ri In pretended to be her and- ...
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 









HAHAHHHAH, no that's fake I made it up shhhhhhh. I'm just kidding calm the heck down there was no kissing and no pretend Hanna's running about.


They just kind of met so definitely I won't be writing a kissing scene...
 

Yet. (;

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luckypyo #1
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah..... spoiler much waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah...