Review to "The Runaway Ice Princess" http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/433836/the-runaway-ice-princess-arrangedmarriage-dbsk-gangs-jaejoong-exo-kai-kris

The tittle itself made me want to read it as I was browsing through fanfictions. I think that it will bring in a lot of readers, it already has! The foward itslef was a bit boring, but interesting at the same time. Maybe if you just added some more interesting words it be a lot more interesting. The character list was very discriptive and told the reader what the was going to be suspected as the characters personality.

  I really like the idea of the first chapter. It told a bit of the main characters past. Usually this type of chapter would be boring, but I found it cute and interesting. The second chapter was funny I loved how sungjong was dressed as a girl and the main character thought that two guys were hurting a girl. these first two chapters really pulled me into the story. I think it did to a lot of readers. all of the chapters were really good so far my favourite would be "Hey, chick!" I found this chapter very amusing and funny. I can't wait till you finish the story.

 Review by: elfkali