What should I do with my story?

   I want to write a story, and I even started writing it but I don't know what to do now. I have created a story only for oneshots and I have one complete oneshot there (it's in Polish, not English) and other one which I have to finish but I don't know how. What do you think will be better for me, turning it into chaptered story or staying with oneshot? If you want to choose the second option then I don't know when I will update those oneshots, probably not in this year. Chaptered story is the best option if you want me to make this story sooner, because it will be short (about 5-10 chapters, but I don't think it will be long enough to make it to 10th chapter). I hope you will leave me your feedback, because I really don't know what to do. If you want it to be a chaptered story then I have finished 1st chapter already.

 

             Here is the small part of what I have written so far:

   You are pathetic. I don't even know how you were able to turn out to be that disgusting.

   Kris' words came back to occupy Luhan's brain once again, forbidding him from taking a short nap. Even tough it was nighttime, Luhan couldn't just go straight to bed and welcome the slumber, because he still could hear the disappointment and disgust in Kris' voice that was a lot heavier than the teenager expected it to be. There was no more space left for other emotions in Luhan's heart and the boy couldn't hold back the tears that were threatening to fall after the whole day of avoiding his brother.

"You are right, hyung, I really am pathetic" Luhan whispered to no one but himself, feeling lonely in his misery which he has created all by himself.

   He still remembers how it all started, when his life turned into the living hell. He thought he was strong enough to endure the insults, cursing, calling him names and much, much more. But no, Luhan wasn't prepared for that at all. He wasn't even prepared for his loss, for losing his dearest brother who hated him from the bottom of his heart now.

 

              Eolin <3

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dream_keeper88
#1
Though I write an average of 3000 words per chapter (writing short is rather difficult), I turned what was supposed to be a two-shot into 10 drabbles - 500 words minimum. Because 1. I haven't written myungber before and 2. It was my first song fic. It would take long if I don't divide into small chunks. Knowing myself, the two-shot would have turned into a 3k-word chaptered fic. In short, do what you are most comfortable in.
-Tigress-
#2
WRITE A CHAPTERED STORY!!!! I love your writing, I wanna read a KrisHan from you <3