。・°°・命运 Lies Here. 소라 .。.:*☆ • ♎ Chen

 

 

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 {KIM JONGDAE}
21/09/92 92-LINER HIGH 1ST SORROWFUL
« Are you my Miss Right? I guess not... »
PASSIVE. THIS IS HIM
"WHY DON'T YOU LIKE ME? AM I NOT GOOD ENOUGH?"
IS WHAT HE FREQUENTLY ASKS
NO ONE HAS SEEN HIM SMILE. HE'S ALWAYS SAD
WILL YOU BE THE ONE WHO'LL MAKE HIM SMILE FOR YOU?


{REVIEW}
APPLICANT'S NAME STATUS

 

{REVIEW 01}
LEE HEIRYUNG ACCEPTED

Hi Dyno! Thanks for applying! There are a lot of things I need you to change... I guess it's your first time applying? You didn't replace the pictures with your selected ulzzang.. Please do so... For your face claim, Kim SeukHye, another applicant took her... And for you backup face claim, may I know who is she? Her name? My goodness... Her bestfriend commit suicide?! HeiRyung is just so... Real? I can totally picture her out in my mind! Good job! Please do link pictures to the characters in the Stick With You section to help me get a better vision of their looks? You have to state their occupation for each and everyone of them... ie Lawyer, Doctor etc. How do JongDae and HeiRyung interact with each other? Same goes to SuHo... And, SuHo is a 91 liner and HeiRyung is a 92 liner.. I don't think they're in the same class? Provided you state that in what class... ie. tuition centre, music centre etc. I like how you describe her studying ethics... and also her project learning time! SuHo being a secret admirer of HeiRyung is possible... Well, that's all for now! Thanks for applying! Welcome to SOLA :) ---MyKyu96

 

{REVIEW 02}
HAN SORA ACCEPTED

Hey Chico! Thanks for applying! But I guess I have to put you on the pending list first... Your password is wrong... It should be your ideal type but not your bias.. :) Please do change that... Anyway, I'll still review your application.. :) She did stood out with those traditional clothes and the trainee part.. :) Everything is well written... :) There's also another thing... JongDae is a 92 liner and SoRa is a 95 liner... It's not possible for them to be in the same class :) The school charity marathon event sounds great :) Just change those two :)  Welcome to SOLA :) Once again, thanks for applying :) ---MyKyu96

 

{REVIEW 03}
KIM HANEUL ACCEPTED

Hi Nisa! Thanks for applying! I'm sorry but you have to change your face claim as both HyoJin and ShinYeong were taken... There are two HaNeul in this story :) Do expect some dramas :) Members? Who are the members stated in the personality? Krystal is always being stated as a rival... I guess she's just too pretty and famous :) Please do state on how she came to SOLA.. How did she ended up studying in SOLA.. :)There are also things to change in the love interest section.. As JongDae is sorrowful in this story, I don't think he'll play pranks on her.. And please do not state that JongDae has an interest on her to be fair for all applicants :) LuHan's meeting with HaNeul doesn't really click.. LuHan is an arrogant guy in this story... So, he shouldnt be making sure that she arrive safely at home? And why LuHan was following her? Please do change that :) Your application is fine now! Welcome to SOLA :) Thanks for applying! ---MyKyu96

 

 

{REVIEW 04}
RYU DAHAE ACCEPTED

Hi Minah! Thanks for applying! :) For the uniform style wise, I'll be upsetting you I guess? Or maybe you'll be excited.. Well who knows? Okay... I've chose the uniform for the girls and it's something like what you have stated in the style :) Your application was well organised :) Good job! There's nothing to point out regarding to your application :) Don't worry! I too do have a preference for guys to be more dominant :) Well, though sweet talks are good but I don't really fancy that as it always leads to dishonesty :) Pfftt... Sorry for blabbing all these here... Anyway, welcome to SOLA :) ---MyKyu96

 

{REVIEW 05}
CHO SAERA ACCEPTED

Hi Scotty! Sorry for the late review... I was having headache yesterday... Well, I'm back now :) SaeRa sure has lots of brothers and I'm loving it! More characters = More drama :) SaeRa's application was an easy one... Sunggyu is a gay? I will assume that SaeRa got into SOLA throught the normal basis :) Nothing to be ammend :) Welcome to SOLA :) ---MyKyu96

 
 


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annisayoontaec
#1
i have fix all my mistake^^

Anything else?
21chicoB
#2
I've edited the things you told me to. Hope it's great now.. *prays*
Thanx for your hardwork!
:3
YYSdyno #3
i fixed some of the stuff including the photos, hyperlink, the family profiles, and i also fixed up how me and chen and suho met and stuff :3 thank you ! (3 sorry for the mistakes, i'm really new to this TT.TT