。・°°・命运 Lies Here. 소라 .。.:*☆ • ♊ Kris

 

 

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 {KRIS WU YIFAN}
06/11/90 90-LINER HIGH 3RD HEARTLESS
« Make my heart beat? Impossible. »
ABANDONED BY HIS FAMILY
HE RECEIVED NO LOVE
AND HE NEVER TRIED TO LOVE
BECAUSE THIS IS WHAT HE SAY
"WHAT IS LOVE? I DON'T KNOW HOW TO LOVE"
 
 

{REVIEW}
APPLICANT'S NAME STATUS

 

{REVIEW 01}

HAN AHRA ACCEPTED

Hi zashi! Thanks for applying! Can you please give a simple name for AhRa's father's beauty company? Just a simple one will do. So according to your details given, you'll be in SOLA middle 1st grade. Can you give me more of her dark side? Because dealing with this heartless guy above can be lot more complicated than the rest.. I have to both look at the good and bad side of AhRa. Composing songs as a hobby? Me too! I enjoy composing! >U< According to the details, AhRa seems to be another heartless girl like the heartless guy above. The way she has a tatto and the ear piercing gives a fearful aura to her. Great job! I need you to change a little bit in your love interest section though... Kris is heartless... So I do hope that the first meeting wouldn't be AhRa and him as a couple? and for Lay, Lay is a 91 liner whereas AhRa is a 95 liner... They are not in the same class... Please do correct that too... The others is fine! I maybe opening a Basketball club in SOLA? and there will be drama for AhRa and Kris! Anyway, thanks for applying! You're accepted! Welcome to SOLA! :) ---MyKyu96

 

{REVIEW 02}
MA SIYEON ACCEPTED

Hi siyeon! I do practically live here too! :) Can you please give a name to Siyeon's dad's financial firm? I love how siyeon is so family oriented... But she is really stubborn one too! like me ^^" Ice skating as a hobby is a really rare one! I wish I could skate too... Haha! Back to your application, the status of Siyeon and Kris should be changed... I'm sorry! In this story, Kris is a heartless guy... So... ya... I'm sorry! If there are KSL classes, I think it wouldn't be appropriate for a 95 liner to study with a 90 liner? Please do change that... You can change it to may be Siyeon is applying for the Student Union? That may make sense to the first meeting you stated there... It's just a suggestion~ I like SeHun's first meeting with SiYeon and their interactions! Sure thing! I'm glad that you liked this story! :) The scene that you requested was somehow lingering in my mind already/// No worries! Besides the ones that I'd stated above, your application was an easy one! Thanks for applying! Welcome to SOLA! :)---MyKyu96

 

{REVIEW 03}
KIM HEAJUNG ACCEPTED

Hi Sherry! I had fun reading your application! I will be putting HeaJung as the president of the Students' Union alongside with Kris. :) Hope you don't mind that.. :) She's there to represent the girls in SOLA.. According to your description for HeaJung's personality, it reminds me of one of my best friend... She's exactly like HeaJung! She started painting at a young age, a happy-go-lucky girl, everything that you mentioned... Such coincidence! :) I personally really love your application! There's nothing for you to change nor edit in your application! You're accepted! Welcome to SOLA! ---MyKyu96

 

{REVIEW 04}
LEE HYEJOO ACCEPTED

Hi Infi! I love HyeJoo's personality! But it must be really tired for her to live in this world alone.. I was actually once like HyeJoo in my life... I felt betrayed by the whole world... Dramas everywhere... Only music and studies could cure me up at that moment :) But then it was my friends who helped me out :) I will try to find more female applicants to be her friends so that in the end, she won't feel that lonely and being neglected by everyone :) I'll help you find a rival for HyeJoo :) Anyway, you're accepted! Thanks for applying! Welcome to SOLA! ---MyKyu96



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InfinityRhapsodyl
#1
oh wow.. thank you for the nice review.. kkk
and yeah.. she's so lonely... and that's so sweet if you'll find some friends for her.. lol
thank you for liking and accepting her..
hwaiting!!
Pinksnwflk
#2
Thanks Author-nim! Hea Jung's personality is actually a mirror of mine, and i enjoy writing it!
siyeon #3
Hey authornim! I just finished fixing up my app (: haha i am glad you liked it! and really? I love ice-skating so heh heh heh :D mhm i like sehun and Siyeon's interactions too~ LOL but yes, here is my updated app so i hope that you like it!~

http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/756412
farahrisashi
#4
done fix it. tell me if there any wrong again