。・°°・命运 Lies Here. 소라 .。.:*☆ • ♉ LuHan
20/04//90 90-LINER HIGH 3RD ARROGANT
« Money is all I need to grab your heart »
{REVIEW}
APPLICANT'S NAME STATUS
{REVIEW 01}
CHOI DAMIN ACCEPTED
Hi Hana! Thanks for applying! There are a few things that I would like to point out regarding your application. Firstly, in the personality section, DaMin is too good to be true. She is only rude to those whom she doesn't like. That's all? Can you please show me her bad side too? For the rival section, you did great. I could never imagine IU in that way. As for the love interest section, the status between LuHan and DaMin is crushes? Please do correct that. As for the reason, LuHan is arrogant, rich and spoilt in this story. Why would LuHan have a crush on DaMin? The first meeting was a bit cliche. How exactly they become best friends? As for your backup love interest, XiuMin is a casanova in this story. I can accept that both of them are best friends. Same goes here, the first meeting is cliche. Please do change that too. Do take note that MinSeok is a casanova. I maybe putting your scene request as I liked the idea that DaMin spotted LuHan with IU. I even got the idea how would LuHan answer DaMin if she ever questions him about that! You're accepted! Anyway, thanks for applying! Welcome to SOLA! ---MyKyu96
{REVIEW 02}
LEE HANEUL ACCEPTED
Hey Vi! Can I call you that? The style of HaNeul is well written! But airport? training? I think you must be mistaken... This is just a school... But the airport fashion do makes sense if HaNeul is from a wealthy family.. She could be flying all around the world rite? And please do state how did she enter SOLA in the background section... Is the old brother a freak? I hate him ._. Can you just give a name to HaNeul's father's company? Ahhh... and apparently you chose the same ulzzang for the older brother and her best friend.. Please do change that :) Ughh! I love LuHan and HaNeul's first meeting! But for YiXing, I guess you have to change a bit... YiXing is a cold and artistic artist in this story... Her project learning sounds like the old me.. Once again, thanks for applying and please do change the details I'd mentioned above! You're accepted! Welcome to SOLA! Thanks for applying! ---MyKyu96
{REVIEW 03}
NAM JUNGHWA PENDING
Hi Alice! Thanks for applying! Good description for her personality! I like her personality... Its suits the reality better.. The background is well written too! There's something.. Is it possible that the parents are that young? Please change that... >< And please do give simple names for JungHwa's parents' company.. For both the fashion company and the insurance company.. Suzy being a rival? Wow... but those details... I would like to personally make her a bad and evil character! :) The interactions between LuHan is a bit outstanding from the others.. What if both JungHwa and LuHan met in a meeting? You know like those rich people having some buffet..? How will she react? I would like to know that... Having BaekHyun as a love interest... Hmm.. you're the first I can say! I have a few plots wandering in my mind now... Well done with this application! Just take note of the few I stated above and change it... I'll be putting you on the pending list first! Thanks for applying! ---MyKyu96
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