。・°°・命运 Lies Here. 소라 .。.:*☆ • ♈ XiuMin
26/03/90 90-LINER HIGH 3RD CASANOVA
« Let's not talk about love and play on! Girls love me. Don't they? »
{REVIEW}
APPLICANT'S NAME STATUS
{REVIEW 01}
HONG HYEJIN ACCEPTED
Hey there Gaby! There are a few things I need you to change in your application... The birth year range I gave was 1990-1995 only but yours is 1999... Please do change that... I understand the body fit clothes... I understand it so much because by 54 year old dad still loves wearing these type of clothes... He do have a fit body though... He was a fitness instructor before... Back to your application, your background and personality is well written... But I don't think I'll be able to write those rated things.. I wanted to believe that an innocent young girl won't do that... So much of Asians mindset... >< And for the fears section, I think I did mention to state the reason for those fears.. Please do take note of that... I'll be inserting the photography extracurricular because there are some applicants who also enjoys photography.. Can you give me a picture link to her vintage like room? I would like to see it~ You don't have to fill those personality od yixing and minseok in the rival section... I like how you describe Minseok and JongDae! The scene between HyeJin and JongDae is written well! Good job! I understand those studying ethics that you wrote there.. To be honest, one of my friend's primary school mate was known to be like this... What was worse is that the parents will cut him at the back of his ear if he doesn't get a complete perfect score... Crazy people ._. It's okay to copy and paste! I understand! You're not using too many of them! At least you didn't use all 12 of them rite? Thanks for applying! Please do change those little details that I'd mentioned! You're accepted! Welcome to SOLA! :) Thanks for applying! ---MyKyu96
{REVIEW 02}
KIM SAERI ACCEPTED
Hey Tieyra! Thanks for applying! I love how you relate her to SUHO! Saeri's personality is detailed... as well as the background! I really had it pictured in my mind when I was reading through it.. In her trivia, her second brother likes to call her 'Joonmyeon' for no particular reason? Isn't it his name? I didn't get that part... Please do explain? and JoonKi as well has HyoSeung has the same face claim... Please do change that... And who is JiYeon in her rival? I guess it's ChoMi? I'm impressed on the meetings between both of SaeRi's love interest! In simple, your application is neat and an easy one! I just have to put you on the pending list first then before you get back to me with those answers for the questions I stated above... You're accepted! Welcome to SOLA! Once again, thanks for applying! ---MyKyu96
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