Story, what do you guys think?

12 boys, born to have powers.

They are angel, but they are special one, because a normal angel doesn't have any power, but the 12 of them have power and are very powerful.

Before they were born, the crystal of heaven had already chosen them as the next generation of guardian.

They are born to protect the 12 powers.

Each of the boy get a necklace on the day they are born. And the necklace must be separate into half, one part, wear by the boys while the other part, wear by the girl who turn out to be their partners.

Their partners, the 12 girls are human with powers. Their parents are human, without powers. But those girls was chosen by the crystal too, so they have powers. Unlike the boys, the girls' power will only be discover when she was 10.

It was a hard life to the 12 girls that have powers. People who saw their power think that their monster and refuse to be friends with them, not even walk near them, scaring that their powers will hurt them.

But the 12 girls seem like they have a bond between them, they met with each other, and when they know that all of them have powers, they become best friends, very close best friends.

They even build a mansion in the woods of the school, the 12 of them live there together, in there, they can use their power without caring other people. But once they went out the mansion, of course, they have to hide their powers and become a normal student.

The 12 boys have to find their partners and give them the necklace before the necklace could harm their life. The power of the necklace was too powerful, if one person wear the whole necklace, his own power couldn't balance with the necklace's power and his life will be harm.

Giving them the necklace was one mission, teaching them about their powers and controlling them is another mission. But first, the boys have to stay in the girls' school and also hide their identity but of course, they're not going to hide in front of the girls.

 

Tell me if it's all right with this story?

Please!!

 

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yumiwumi
#1
Sounds pretty nice XD
But 24 people? Quite a lot, so be clear x3
love_day
#2
hmm so far, it is a good one. But since this is all about 24 people, it is going to be abit confusing! you will have to explain a lot!

Are you going to write about this?
aznawzmao
#3
That's a pretty good idea, although are you going to have someone beta read it?