I had to write another short story! Tell me what you think!!! *sorry it's sad!*

Alone, abandoned, impulsive, and insane those were the words that described Junhyung as of this very moment. Then the word fear creep into his mind and slithered down and found solitude and solace in his heart. His overwhelming worry made his body shut down, it ceased to function. It was as if some outside force decided to play some dark, sinister joke on him. It decided to alter his destiny, now he was stuck in a never ending nightmare.  He tried to regain his breath. Junhyung tried to move, talk, scream if need be but the illusion of her still in his arms was too much to bear. The truth was that his little girl, his little bundle of sunshine and the love of his life were now nothing more than a shadow. They were now just ashes, his house and his two favorite girls were nothing more than a forsaken pile of ashes. He laughed bitterly to himself; he should’ve known that this would have happened. He was notorious for believing lies, Fairytales if you will. He should’ve known that nothing perfect ever lasts… But he was so caught up in fiction, that he forgot what fact was…

PLEASE PLEASE tell me what you think! It's for a grade!