New Story Idea

Baekhyun had fallen from Heaven after being chased by two guards. They accused him of stealing the Tabernacle from the Palace of God. One of the guards shot him in the back, where his right wing was located. He tried to fly out but fell when his wings failed him.

He landed in an alley, putting his hand on his back, flinching when his hands made contact with the wound. Tears sprung into his eyes when he realized he his wing was shot.

"Hello?" A voice caught his attention. He looked at the boy and shrunk when he saw the height of the voice. Tall with a short cut hair style, brown hair and a deep voice. "Are you okay?" He asked. Baekhyun shook his head and cried harder when he thought of his wing. "Do you want me to help you?" Baekhyun nodded.

 

So what do you guys think???

If anyone can help me with a Title and if someone can make a poster, I'll be happy!

Can I please have opinions for the story idea.

I know it sounds weird but I love people being critical because it makes me a better writer. So if you can, I will appreciate it!

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CatalepsyCross
#1
Love the idea!!!!!!!
How about: Rebellious Angel Byun Beakhyun
chanchanoo
#2
Sounds good. I want to read it!
I'll try making a poster when I'm home haha
LeeTaeminni #3
You could maybe call the story:
(The) Beauty Of An Angel
Fallen Angel
Angels Aren't Real
The Existence Of An Angel
Like A Fairytale

I dunno just came up with the names ^_^ :3
K-pop1017 #4
I guess this is good but please only put angst when baek has to go back and not like right through the whole thing
minaminami #5
You NEED to start writing this right this instant @w@
Kyla162
#6
I love it!

Gonna channel my inner BVBArmy fan here: Fallen Angel
moonlit-lane
#7
Lol, was this the thing you were thinking about in History?