Bittersweet

► Bittersweet::Graphic Review by s3xyangel ►

First Look: 4 / 10 points

It gave me a taste of spring and calmness. The poster wasn't edit very well but in general, I see angst and romance mixed.

Typography: 13 / 15 points

I like the font for both the title and the credit, it suits the graphic very well. I wouldn't have used black though because it blended in too well with your background of lavenders. I would suggest adding glow behind the font or simply use a little color.

Colors: 8 / 15 points

The colors were spring colors that gives life to the graphic but it wasn't something that would suit "bittersweet."

Pictures: 10 / 15 points

The pictures were okay as in quality. Both characters looks sad so I think this is okay to be used.

Technique: 5 / 15 points

The blending was bad. You can see the picture's background still there and the positioning was bad. I would've made Luhan bigger and placed him in the back. In front of him, you can place a small version of the girl. This way it doesn't look odd.

Mood/Theme: 5 / 10 points

The mood must have been angst or slight angst with romance. A bittersweet love. The graphic gave off romantic feelings that contained slight angst. It wasn't great but I think it's okay.

Texture: 5 / 10 points

You didn't use much of a texture or stock. So nothing much to be sad. I think you should blend the background with the characters together better by placing the background on top and doing some erasing or some soft light/hard light.

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