reviewed by: KimJongKeyShipper | Minstrels {The Review Shop}

Tittle: 9/10

I like it. It makes me curious and it is really powerful.

Foreword/Description: 9/10

Wow, heavy. Just alone in your foreword you have managed to give this much information (while not revealing too much) and get me totally caught up in his thoughts and emotions.

 

Appereance: 7/10

It is neat and simple.

 

Characterization: 13/15

I really like the difference between Sungmin and Ryeowook and how you portrayed them and make a contrast out of their personalities. Kyuhyun is hard to understand right now but I'm guessing he'll become less mysterious in future chapters.

 

Writing style/ Grammar/ Spelling: 18/20

Well, I absolutely love how you write. It made me think of poetry. I did have to look up one word because I didn't know, but it shows that your vocabulary is very good and I honestly did not find any mistakes, so that's good.

 

Originality/ Creativity/ Plot: 18/20

The story is heavy to read, there are a lot of struggles that many of us can relate to. I like the way you write but be careful whwn writing about suicide/ self harm because it can be a very sensitive subject for some people, but I think you did well. I can seee things with Kyuhyun developing, but I can't say much about it right now.

 

Extra: 12/15

You hadve a few posters which were nice but apart from that, nothing special.

 

My Response:

 

Characterization: Yes, there will be more character development on Kyuhyun's part; I think it's too early to let readers know of him yet. I'm glad you like the way I portray Sungmin and Ryeowook. I've been anxious to release Ryeowook's side story but it's not time for that yet- though it has been written already.

 

Writing style/ Grammar/ Spelling: I'm glad you liked my writing style... It makes you think of poetry, really? How so? As for spelling... well, I have a bit of an OCD when it comes to spelling.

 

Originality/ Creativity/ Plot: I understand that completely, but I can only be careful enough. After all, it is a "heavy" plot and some things are necessary for the story line. I don't think I'll be making it that easier for readers and develop Kyuhyun and Sungmin's relationship anytime soon, but I also know it can be too far into the story because it can bore the reader.

 

Extra: Extras will be coming but like I previously said, it will take a while for side stories and other things I have in mind.

 

They also made a beautiful POSTER for DoD~

 

working on DoD~ In a happy mood~