Again with the script!! SOWWY....

 Guys i did this for my script i need a lillte bit more ideas to it!!.. 

I know my english like .. please dont judge??? *blink* *smiles*

THIS IS MY STORY…

HOUSE –  AT NIGHT

It was late night, 4 girls including me, were eating dinner in the living room while watching TV. We’re best friends since childhood age. So we’ve been staying together now when we grown up.

 

MINA:

“Are we sleeping early tonight? Because I don’t think I’m feeling bubbly tonight. You know what I mean? I’m just so bored”

 

KRYSTAL:

“Are you sick? You don’t look like yourself today.”

( Getting up from the chair and goes to the kitchen to wash the dishes )

 

MINA:

“Maybe… Yeah I’m not myself tonight! Maybe I’m going to sleep early tonight. I don’t know.. urghhh”

( Laying down on the couch, frustrated )

 

HANY:

“Hey, That’s my spot”

( Scolding mina )

 

After awhile, Krystal came back after cleaning and washing the dishes. Krystal is the ‘Diva’ in the house and a mother-like too.

KRYSTAL:

“OH MY GOSH, can you girls stop fighting and clean the left over before we do anything else?”

( She starts nagging at us which was fighting over a couch )

 

STELLA:

( Came running into the living room with excitement and start jumping )

“Lets do a sleepover party just for tonight? I miss the old days when we were little, eating snacks, candies, and more”

( She explain while gesturing with her hands )

The living room was in silence everybody was in their own little world, Everybody ignore Stella, they were tired to even think of anything,

ZOE:

( Suddenly pop out from a room )

“Yes, I missed it too, I remember not sleeping the whole night when we were watching some ghost story”

( She goes to Stella and starts jumping in excitement and goes to Krystal which was in the room wanting to take her phone out to text )

 

Zoe and Stella opens the door for Krystal to come out and tries to hug her, Krystal dodged the hug and both of them is hugging the door frame now. Krystal chuckled and tries to ignore and sits down on the other couch and begin to text.

Hany arrives at the door and doesn’t react to Zoe and Stella’s weirdness. She past Krystal and trips over her foot.

KRYSTAL:

“Hey, are you okay?? You should walk properly next time!”

( She look at her foot and look disgusted that someone touched her shoe )

 

HANY:

“Sorry? Wait,why are you suddenly getting so angry about?”

 

KRYSTAL:

“Its non of your business! Now go away!”

 

HANY:

“Oh come on, Do you have to be this angry? Its just a shoe for goodness sake”

 

 

KRYSTAL:

“Well, for you it does but not for me!”

( After awhile, Hany sort of make her way to the couch and would sit really close to Krystal )

 

Mina would walk walk cooly after pushing Zoe and Stella off the door frame and stare at Krystal.

I need more ideas... T__T WHAT SHOULD I WRITE AFTER MINA STARE AT KRYSTAL???

owh owh and its still a sleepover story though... Please?? need more to write!! It was due last week but then the lecturer asked me to like change it a little... =.=' Anyway, kamsahamnida...

PS: Aptonkey, i did some of your ideas here.. se what i did there~~~ ^__^

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MottiNuri_LaGorda #1
I hope you don't mind if I'm being an evil grammar Nazi :)

you should change some of your sentences :

-"We’re best friends since childhood age. So we’ve been staying together now when we grown up" to We're best friends since childhood. So we've been together even when we've grew up.

- "Krystal is the ‘Diva’ in the house and a mother-like too" to Krystal is the 'Diva" in the house and very mother-like too.

-Left over to leftover(s)
-"Everybody ignore Stella, they were tired to even think of anything" to Everybody ignored Stella, they were too tired to even think of anything.


I'm sorry if you feel offended :)
It's nice to see you working hard. Fighting!!