Improving my stories

Hey guys,

 

so lately I have been thinking about what I was writing, and actually I wrote only what I wanted to and maaaaayybe have left you guys out a little bit, so that's why I didn't got any more comments so far....

I'm writing because I want to, its sth like a creative flow~~~~ for me.... i dont know.... 

anyway... I want to do a story that you want to read, and not only I want to write... see?? :D

 

So I just wanted to know from you guys what you like about my stories and my style of writing, and what you dislike.. so rather like: what should I improve (except maybe for grammar and vocabulary...i know i have still errors with that.... not a native speaker...o.o) and what do you think I should leave out (like trashy stuff although I don't know what this would include... or always changing povs.. anything!)

I want this to be comfortable to read and easygoing... if i wanted to write like an encyclopedia than i would do but not here... 

you get what I mean, rite?? :D cuz i srsly am not quite sure what my point was now... (another error.... cant remember what I said before, and cannot come to the point... bboing bboing...)

 

All right, I hope at least some of you will reply and help me improving. 

If you don't have an idea of my writing style, please check out my stories. they are SS501 biased, and some are quite long.. so .. if you have free time, enjoy reading, because it would make me happy and improve my style if you tell me what you think!!

 

Thank you for your support and that you bear with me!!

 

Fighting

Love to you all lessthanthree

S_pport501

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