Feedback

 

i’ll be a bit shameless for the millionth time once and ask for feedback on my scenarios/fanfic.

one thing i realized while i was on a mission of reading famous fanfics for my biases is that i’m lacking neither the creativity nor the strong language.

honestly, most of the famous fanfics i’ve read were crap not up to my standards. the language was weak, no description, and the events were too quick. however i noticed the great feedback they all had and that was when i started questioning my writing.

as a person who’d been trying to write from a very long time but due to laziness patience issues, stopped writing. finding motivation in Infinite (Hoya), i finally was able to complete one thing in my whole life! each time i finished a scenario, i’d feel a sense of accomplishment for being able to do something right for the first time.

as a person who’s considered talentless, you can say i finally found the closest thing to a talent.

i don’t like praising myself, it’s not that i’m modest, but i really hate being under the spotlight for things i couldn’t be proud of. (i always hated the attention i got for my grades at school, i always felt everyone can be achieving in that field if they worked harder), but now finding out that writing is something a few people with the right passion can do, i’d like to be acknowledged for it.

i don’t want you guys to send me only positive things! really, i want critical things. i want comments that make me want to write better, i want comments that point out my flaws.

i’d like to be better in that field. i’m a perfectionist, i like things being at their best.

i hope if you read this you wouldn’t think i’m an attention seeker, but i started this account for writing mainly.

i’ll always be thankful for you guys if you took a minute of your time to tell me your opinion. i don’t care about the views/subscribers as much as i care about what you think.

thank you for reading this!

i love you all! <3

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lovejunsu
#1
I agree with K1luvs.
I really love your writing style and everything is understandable.
Your stories are brilliant!
Keep up the excellent work {^_^}
strawberrxes
#2
Hello! ^^ Well I have to agree with you on this, some fanfics are bleh, but people still read them and leave wonderful comments. Something I kind of understand, but still. When I comment on stories I don't really tell the author what they did right or wrong (critique their style) because everyone has different styles. I personally like your style. Your stories are easy to read and to the point. We know what's going on and don't have to ask ourselves questions about what's going on. You are a great writer! I love your work! Keep it up. I don't know if this was what you were looking for, but yea. ^^
ffflll
#3
Actually, in my opinion, you write good stories. Like really. Maybe it's just because you have silent readers (like myself). :P If you have a flaw in your other stories tho (which I have not read yet), I'll try to point it out if that helps.
But really, you're a good author. :)