Opinions for 'Forever Yours~'

Okay so...Hi everyone :) *Waves*

This blog post is written,because we(author & co-author) wanted to know...if you guys are enjoying our story 'FOREVER YOURS~' or not.

Actually lately I see some people unsubscribing the story D: this means there is something lacking in it.

Its not like we are offended or so,no,nothing like that.

It might be that the story isn't interesting for you...but..if so...please don't hesitate to tell us our drawbacks,any kind of criticism is welcome urm..just dont bash?

We would really like to know your honest opinions.

We will work on them,given its possible :3

We can't guarantee you all a perfect story but we are trying our best (Y)

And yes..feel free to give your ideas :D

The plot is apparently ready :) but additions won't harm ;)

Criticism is always looked as way of improving one's drawbacks,so yeah please tell us what we can add or reduce :)

Thankyou for taking some time out to read this *Bows*

 

Comments

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AnnabellCK #1
oh my, your story line is awesome :"
please continue the sequel, I really want the OC get back with Lay :" I'm waiting author-nim. please hurry :"

FIGHTING! <3
nashaluhan #2
i love your story !! im start to be Lay's fan because of this fanfic !! author-nim , fighting !! keep your awesome workk .. wooot wooot
coolplp9
#3
I love it it so A-M-A-Z-I-N-G <3
Indah95
#4
I looooovveeee ur story :)
so much :)
cheeseyplease
#5
i love ur story !!!
hyuksulay
#6
i loooooooove it sooo much <3 <3
LUPITA_C
#7
THE STORY IS NICE. THE CHAPTERS ARE SOMEWHAT SHORT BUT OVERALL I ENJOY IT
heryueniverse
#8
the story is good! im not a total lay biased, but im really enjoying, the chapters are somewhat short but other than that, evrythng is great
Hayrunnisa #9
I love the story line,the point of the structure has been described clearly without any confusion, however, lately the chapters are pretty short. :) I'd like the chapters to be a bit long but not too long :) :)
linakrum #10
Silent reader here :DD
I realy love this story ^^
How can anyone even
unsubscribe to this story? T.T
Hwaiting!!
TheFruitkiwi
#11
I have some things which you guys could improve on:
1- Grammar (i have been seeing a lot of grammar mistakes, it might be because you guys didnt have time to edit but i notice you guys keep confusing -- you are/ you're -- with 'your'.
2- Vocabulary - its at a satisfactory level but it would be nice have some not-so-difficult-to-understand vocabulary.

3- Be more descriptive!! Body language, facial expressions,atmosphere of the scene...etc

Hope this helps and i really really love this story! I really do! ^_^
Alyionkim #12
I love love love love love this story ! Please keep writing and updating .!! HWAITING !
CrimsonNightmares
#13
I love this story i dont know whay people unsubscribe. Please keep writing
Indah95
#14
I love and enjoyed this story so far :)
first, i was imagined there will be someone who liked ___ that's kris.
and the story that i was imagined it's really in your story.
so keep writing :)
hwaiting author-nim :D
Neighbourhood96
#15
I love this story!! I wud like some twist like Huan coming bak etc...