I try to write a new OC fic. Short chaptered story. About cinderella AU. Maybe a bit being influenced by my fic "The Mute Queen" ^^. This story titled "Thorn Flower". A cinderella story but with a different  interpretation by the step sister's point of view. A story that portrayed how a jealousy lead to a hatred, hatred lead to devastation, devastation lead to careness, and careness lead to love.

I can't expect much from this story though because it's an angst. And people who read will definitely hate Yeojin (OC), the step sister. But that's my real goal ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ.

I write a prologue about this story :

In my world, people judge someone by appearance and family background. They judge women by the shape of their face. Dog-like face tend to be nice, friendly, wise, and obedient. Cat-like face tend to be cute, dexterous, loving but selfish. And Fox-like face is the type that mostly people to beware for, they think a woman with foxy face tend to be pretty (mostly like a seducing face), cunning, ambitious, traitorous, and act like a . 

I am born with this face thanks to my mom. People called me a little fox, thanks to my mom too. I hate world since that time. But hating doesn't mean I run away from them. I'll challenge them with their believe. Let's see how a ty face like me could make in this world. I laugh everytime I am thinking of that. They have rules to maintain society and punishments toward whoever that violates the rules. But for me, I have my own rules and judgement. Also my own way to punish myself...

My family lived at a small house at suburb. Not so live happily that everyday was filled with yelling and nagging. I thought as long as there's bread in our stomach and warm clothes to wear everyday, it's called happy. But my mom thought otherwise...

One day, my mom brought me and my fat sister to a big house to meet a middle age man and his beautiful daughter. For my surprise, her attitude changed 180^o to be like a kind yet lovingly mother. I know my mother isn't like that. Sitting from the side, I could see from her eyes a big ambition. Interesting...

She introduced them as our new father and sister. Lord Im Jongin and his only daughter Yoona. I didn't really care with the old man but his daughter. She's beautiful. Her attitude and the way she talked showed me how a high class woman was supposed to be. Which type of her? Dog, cat, or fox? I am not sure. My first impression of her is 'perfection'.

Girls adore perfection. But if that perfection belong to someone else, they tend to hate it. I glanced to my mom for a second. She turned to me and let out a cunning smile. I stunned with surprise when my own lip performed the same smile. I laughed inside myself. Apple doesn't fall far from it's tree. It run in my blood.

I glanced back to Mr. Im's daughter. She smiled tenderly toward me and even called me 'Sister'. I smiled back. Let's see how this perfection could last long.....

So guys, what do you think?

P.S : Here the link of this story "Thorn Flower"