Explanation about the changes in chapter 1, 2, 3, 4. Not for the readers who just started reading the story:  

Chapter 1: 

- Corrected grammar. (Although there are still faults, but I corrected everything I could)

Chapter 2: 

- Added one paragraph at the beginning. 

We were listening to the lecture of the teacher, when some of the boys decided they were bored and turned towards me.

‘’So, Minhee! Where are you from?’’ One of them, I think Byun Baekhyun, asked.

‘’Yeah, we want to know too.’’ The others nodded and agreed with Baekhyun’s question.

‘’I’m from the capital city, where I lived with my family.’’ I answered.

‘’Then why did you guys decide to move to the countryside?’’ Sehun asked.

I sighed. ‘’Ask my mom, she wanted to start afresh and because my father didn’t have any problems wit hit, we moved. I miss the city and the countryside is kind of boring.’’

The guys nodded. ‘’Well it can be pretty boring here, that’s right.’’

‘’But we’ll make sure you won’t be bored! With us you’re going to have the best time of our life!’’ Sehun said.

‘’That sounds cool. I have this feeling that it will be very fun with you guys.’’ I replied.

Then we heard the teacher clear . ‘’Guys, I know that you want to talk with Minhee, but please pay attention!’’

They all half heartedly mumbled a ‘yes’ and turned back towards the board.  

So basically Minhee and the guys talked a little. Minhee thinks living in the countryside will be boring, but the boys (Baekhyun, Sehun) assure her that it won't be boring if she spends time with them. 

Chapter 3:

This is all from the part where Minhee and D.O. talk together, because they ran away from the food fight in the canteen.

I continued talking about myself, ''And uhmmm, I live with my mom, dad and little brother. I love SHINee, ofcourse! I like to sing and play guitar. I also like to go shopping and watch movies. I think I have a girly side, but also a tomboyish side and ehm...  And this is useless information, but I don’t have an interesting fact to tell. ''

New in this paragraph: Minhee tells him that she has a little brother. She says that it's useless information. D.O. later answers that he doesn't mind to get to know her better. 

I thought about it. ''I don't know. I don't think I have the guts to do it. I like singing, but I don’t think I have the potential to star in a musical… Maybe next year?’’ I laughed.

New in this paragraph: Minhee first told D.O. that she was afraid to sing, but in this part she isn't really afraid to sing in front of people, she just thinks she doesn't has the potential to sing in a musical. 

He smiled and told me he was just asking. He himself also wasn’t going to audition.

New: D.O. tells her that he also isn't going to audition, previously he didn't say if he was going to audition or not. 

Chapter 4:

They are sitting in the library together and after the part about their names, Minhee asks about their ages. 

‘’What about your ages?’’ I asked.

Suho laughed. ‘’Please, don’t get me started about that. Just remember the fact that Minseok hyung is the oldest, Sehun is the youngest. Second oldest is Luhan and second youngest is Kai. The rest is just in between, doesn’t really matter.’’

‘’How old are you exactly, Minhee? And when’s your birthday?’’ Sehun asked.

‘’I’m turning 17 in November, two months to go.’’ I answered.

‘’Then your almost a year younger than some of us. How come?’’

I answered: ‘’Oh, it’s pretty complicated. But I’ll make it short. When I was in Kindergarten, I could already read and write more than the kids of my age. Since my mental age was already older when I finished Kindergarten, they made me skip 1st Grade of  Primary School. So I was a year younger when I entered 2nd Grade of Primary School.’’

They all ’Ooohd and Aaahd.’

‘’Then you can call us oppa!’’ Chanyeol smirked while saying it.

I awkwardly laughed. ‘’Haha, yeah… maybe later.

Just read, nothing to explain about it. ^

 

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