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 creativity [8/15]

I think the poster is quite plain really but I can see you made an effort and had a few ideas of what you wanted to do but it wasn't executed very well.

 

immaculacy [9/15]

You really need to polish up on small details everywhere on this poster. They might seem small but since they are almost everywhere, it's quite an eyesore... First off are the white spots lining the green part of the background. It is evident that you did not fill the area perfectly and it looks very untidy. The outline of the circles are very rough and the black outline itself looks out of place. The dots and dashes outlining the characters look very messy and distracting in a bad way. Also L's render should be sharpened.

 

 color usage [11/15]

In terms of colour coordination, it's quite acceptable. It also suits the RomCom theme since everything is bright and cheery. But the mood of the poster doesn't suit the theme so it's abit confusing.

 

 typography [6/10]

It's quite plain but it somehow suits the mood of the poster and the title itself. The colour also matches so there's really nothing to comment about. But the copyright is too outstanding and looks out of place. Go for a smaller font size and a plainer font and don't make the colour too bold.

 

 blending [7/15]

There isn't any blending to comment on... but I'll just give you a pass for this. The position of the characters against the background is good. Also the way it looks like L is looking at her and stuff. So /nodnod/

 

picture(s) used [12/15]

The pictures match each other well but like I mentioned before, L's picture needs to be sharpened since it's blurry. It's quite good. But it doesn't match the theme. RomCom posters are generally happy and playful while the characters in your poster give off a more sullen feeling.

 

overall [9/15]

I may seem harsh about this but I'm just doing my job. It's quite a mess really but overall it's not too bad. You can definitely improve.

 

 

total [62/100]

Please remove the squiggly things on the renders. They look like caterpillars or something orz

 

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I was hesistant to review this from the start since I knew I was probably going to be super harsh so I tried my best to review it seriously taking into consideration all the elements so I hope I was not too unreasonable with my judgement. ^^;;

 

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SANITY-ISOVERRATED

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teaquiIa #1
i lab you ;~;