TITLE;6/10

-SOME PEOPLE MIGHT FIND THE TITLE WEIRD BUT OTHERWISE INTERESTING =)

DESCRIPTION:9/10

-THIS SUMMARIZED THE PLOT BUT HONESTLY,THIS IS GOING TO SPARK THE READER'S CURIOSITY.

GRAMMAR:14/15

-ONLY MINOR MISTAKES ANG COMMON WORD MISUSAGES BUT OTHERWISE SATISFACTORY.

APPEARANCE;9/10

-VERY GIRLY,APT FOR THE STORY.

IMPACT;7/10

-STORY IS GREAT BUT THE PLOT IS VERY FAMILIAR TO THE READERS.

PUNCTUATION:5/5

-NO MISUSAGE OF PUNCTUATION MARKS.HURRAH! \O/

PLOT:16/20

-THE PLOT IS COMMON BUT YOUR TWIST IS REFRESHING.

ORIGINALITY:17/20

-AS I'VE SAID BEFORE,THIS PLOT IS COMMON ALBEIT THE TWIST IS DEFINITELY NEW.

OVERALL SCORING:83/100,YOU CAN DO BETTER NEXT TIME ^^V