Hello ^^~

now this is your requested review for "Oh Mom[TOP]" by BBVIPBaby

TITLE:8/10

-VERY INTERESTING SINCE IT QUESTIONS THE READERS' CURIOUSITY ON WHY "OH MOM" IS THE TITLE.

DESCRIPTION:7/10

-ALTHOUGH IT IS UNDERSTANDABLE,THIS PART IS A LIL BIT CONFUSING.

GRAMMAR;12/15

-ALMOST ALL SENTENCES WERE GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT BUT YOU MADE SOME MISTAKES THAT MIGHT GIVE THE READER SOME CONFUSION OR MISUNDERSTANDING.

APPEARANCE;10/10

-BRAVO ON YOUR SUPER CREATIVE USE OF WHITE SPACE AND CUTE POSTER! ^^

IMPACT:7/10

-GOOD STORY ALTHOUGH I AM NOT SURE THAT THE READER MIGHT REMEMBER THIS.NO OFFENSE.

PUNCTUATION:4/5

-SOME PUCTUATION MARKS WERE MISUSED AND SOME PUNCTUATION MARKS WERE NEEDED.

PLOT:15/20

-PLOT IS DEFINITELY GOOD ALBEIT IT IS SOMEWHAT CONFUSING AND THE READER MIGHT HAVE THE TENDENCY OF MISUNDERSTANDING IT.

ORIGINALITY-18/20

-THIS STORY IS DEFINITELY ONE OF A KIND SINCE THIS IS THE FIRST TIME IVE' EVER READ A STORY LIKE THIS.KUDOS!

OVERALL STORY SCORING:81/100,YOU DO BETTER NEXT TIME DEAR =))