Okay,here's my review for "Kris Finally met his match"

 

TITLE:8/10

-THE TITLE WAS DEFINITELY GETS A READER'S INTEREST SINCE IT URGES THE READER TO ASK WHAT HAPPENED TO KRIS.

 

DESCRIPTION;10/10

-DEFINITELY SUMMARIZES THE STORY WITHOUT SPOILING IT.DON'T CHANGE THIS ONE ^^ ~

 

GRAMMAR:14/15

-NO MAJOR MISTAKES,JUST MISUSED WORDS THAT MIGHT EVOKE WRONG UNDERSTANDING ^^ ~

 

APPEARANCE:8/10

-CREATIVE USE OF WHITE SPACE BUT IT WOULD LOOK BETTER IF YOU HAVE A POSTER =))

 

IMPACT:9/10

-FOR SURE,THIS STORY WILL LINGER IN THE READER'S MIND FOR THE TIME BEING SINCE THIS IS INTERESTING =)

 

PUNCTUATION:5/5

-BRAVO! NO PUNCTUATION ERRORS!

 

PLOT:18/20

-VERY GOOD PLOT AND STORYLINE ALTHOUGH IT REMINDS ME OF "BOYS OVER FLOWERS" lol

 

ORIGINALITY:19/20

-SEEN STORIES SIMILAR TO THIS BUT HAVING KRIS AS THE MAIN CHARACTER IS REALLY OUT OF THE BOX.

 

TOTAL SCORING:91/100,ongratulations!