title:8/10
-the title is somewhat common but it really can draw one's attention.
description:10/10
-expresses enough summary but it doesn't spoil the story =)
grammar;14/15
-grammar was really great although you misused some words and it led to somewhat misunderstandng.
originality:20/20
-I mean,who would've thought of creating a school full of idols? good job!
appearance:9/10
-the creative use of whit space was good,although it would be better if you had a poster.
impact:9/10
-I'm sure that the readers will really remember your story since it is very refreshing to the mind.
punctuation:3/5
-you used some wrong punctuation marks although it was barely noticeable.
plot:19/20
-the story was really good and me (as the reader) is looking forward to the next chappie.

overall scoring:92/100,congratulations!