okay.Here goes my review for "The Games we Play"
title:10/10
-the title is very eyecatching and easily puts the reader in "let me see this fanfic" mode.
description:10/10
-this summarizes the story yet it lends a bit of mischievousness to the story,which the reader will love.
grammar:14/15
-almost all sentences were grammatically correct and only minor mistakes.
appearance:9/10
-I love your poster and the serif thingies in the background ^^ ~
impact:10/10
-After reading your story,I presume that the reader will have the tendency to repeat reading it =)
punctuation:4/5
-No big punctuation errors but remember to put a comma after apostrophes.
for example:
"Fine,I'll do it",she said.

plot:19/20
-the plot of this story is really great and I am looking forward to the next chapters =)
originality:19/20
-Although there are many stories similar to yours,you managed to put in a twist I never expected. ^^ ~

overall scoring:95/100,CONGRATULATIONS!~