The 'Game of Nowhere'
author: KnixxG
chapter(s): 10
date requested: 05 27 13
date completed: 06 02 13

title: 4/5
The title matches the story. However, to the readers who have only seen the title, there's a chance that they may not click on the story since they wouldn't know whhat the content of the story is by just looking at the title. 
 

description and foreward: 9/10
The description and foreward was great. The only thing I actually had a problem with was the length of the layout. Since it was a bit long and certain readers may get impatient while looking at the layout of the description and they may easily get tired of the long reading which isn't the actual story. The author can try to make the description or foreward a bit shorter.
 

plot:  20/20
This aspect of the story was just flawless. The entire plot line and creativity was great. The author also revealed that there would be more plot twists as the story continues. I haven't read another story with a similar plot line at all which is already amazing by itself. The author revealing the fact that there are more twists to come grab the attention and curiousity of many readers. 
By the way, I have subscribed to the story! Awaiting furthur chapters of the story, author-nim. c:
 

characterization: 11/15
The characterization can be improved within this story. I understand that there are twelve characters and that's insanely difficult to manage so I cut some slack since I don't think I've ever read a story with all members of EXO and the author had fully explained their personalities throughout the story.
So far, within this story, Kai, Luhan and Lay are the ones with the clearest personalities. Kai being the short tempered yet inteligent one. Luhan is the one that would do anything and everything for his survival. Lay's the one that's loyal to his friends. He would rather sacrifice himself than kill anyone he cares for. Some scenes and explaining may be needed for everyones' personalities to become clear, but that't it.

writing style: 10/15
In some parts of the story, like in the seventh and eighth chapter, some details got confusing and required some reading in order to fully understand. Maybe the author can try adding me details and changing the wording to make the chapter less confusing? I don't know, but it's up to you to change it however you like, so that readers can interpret the chapter perfectly.
 

mechanics: 20 /25
Occasionally there would be some grammatical errors which need correctly. Mainly on the tense of a specific word within a sentence. The mistake isn't a big one, though they are extremely annoying for readers who cannot stand grammatical errors. There are a couple here and there in nearly every chapter, but these mistakes can be easily changed and noticed when the author is reading the story, checking for mistakes.
 

enjoyment: 9/10
I enjoyed the story greatly. Just in some parts, the story got confusing and those were the times that deducted a point of this area.