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 creativity [12/15]

I like the colours and the textures used in this poster. It provides enough details while still keeping it simple. Although you're only editing the picture of Sulli and adding text to it, it doesn't look plain since she occupies most of the poster. But the textures are a bit too much especially the ones that overlaps her face. The texture on her cheek kind of looks like a bruise and is quite unsightly. The foggy texture doesn't look too good either. Mainly the greenish one on her right shoulder as well as the one on her bangs. I think you should either make it less visible or remove it completely.

 

immaculacy [13/15]

I noticed that some parts of the Sulli picture look grainy like the colour of her shirt and her hair. I think it's more important for the hair to be less sharp since the white is contrasting. But other than that it's fine. It kind of suits the whole mood of the poster ^^

 

 color usage [15/15]

No qualms there; I like the colours since it makes the poster look girly enough but more like a sophisticated girly. Feminine, if you will. :]

 

 typography [8/10]

I'm not particularly fond of the font though it's simple thus fitting for the poster. The absence of the line in the capital "A" unnerves me for some reason so perhaps a simpler font? The gap between them should exist too. And the rectangle could be thinner. 

 

 blending [13/15]

There isn't much blending apart from the way you played with the textures but I'm unsatisified with the opacity so yep. Make some parts less visible.

 

picture(s) used [14/15]

It's a nice and simple picture and I like the cropping but there isn't really any elements relevant to the title. I don't quite see how Sulli's portrait illustrates magic moments. More sparkle and dreamy effects maybe?

 

overall [13/15]

It's a simple and abstract-looking poster with a slight lack of simplicity so it could be improved. It's quite well done but if you really analysed it, the errors become more prominent. If you plan to use this as some sort of representation of your works, you should improve it since keen eyes would be scanning the elements of this poster.

 

 

total [88/100]

I think it's a good poster but it's kind of unbalanced because of the textures and the text. It's a simple piece but the things you added complicates it and it kind of throws people off of the assumed theme.

 

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 creativity [14/15]

I really like the composition of the poster. It's symmetrical but each side is different in its own way so it looks pretty great. (Y) However, it seems a bit too plain for my liking.

 

immaculacy [13/15]

I really like the symmetry but of course it's not perfect. I feel that the blue is too bright to match with the peach colour and the diagonal lines are too thick and visible. I don't like how it can be seen on their faces especially since they're thick lines. I do however, like the foggy texture you used as well as the texture for the bottom middle part of the poster. ^^

 

 color usage [13/15]

Like I mentioned before, the blue is too light. However, even though the pink, blue and orange seem like an odd choice of colours to match with each other to match, they actually look fine. Particularly because of the lightness of it. Also, D.O. is a bit too coloured. Kai's face is unevenly textured but the whole of D.O. is covered so it seems off.

 

 typography [6/10]

Firstly, I like the title. It's simple enough to kind of wrap the whole thing up but it fits the overall look of the poster. However, the credits are barely visible. Of course, credits aren't supposed to be obvious but it's borderline unreadable, really. It puts me off that I had to really look at it to make something off thus it backfires on the "make it not so noticeable" since I needed to focus on it to decipher it.

 

 blending [14/15]

The textures used are quite good and I like the way you played with it but I think you should lower the opacity of the parts that overlap the characters especially their faces.

 

picture(s) used [15/15]

They suit each other well and look alike with the same mood and everything so yep.

 

overall [14/15]

I actually really, really like it apart from the minor errors I pointed out. The thing that bugs me the most is the credits though.

 

 

total [89/100]

Just a bit of modification should do it. Very well done. ^^

 

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Ohoho. Two posters at once! \o/ I hope you don't mind that I reviewed the other one too since I found it on your urm samples from your shop. :P Anyway I really love these posters and I see you like foggy textures alot huh? x3 Anywho, I hope the reviews helped you and yeah. haha. You're pretty awesome. >w<

 

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