Hello my lovely Trainees~ It's Panda, and I have your Homework for the week ^^

Below is my first fanfic and I haven't finished it, and I want you to edit to the extent where you have to change anything you see that seems wrong. You may change the wording of the sentences if they don't make sense, font of the story,size, and any other things you need to do to make editing easier for you.

I only have two requests for you to do that is inevitable. When you edit the chapter, I need your edits to be in a different color than black. It may be red, purple, whatever color you choose, but please make sure it's readable. Also, I need you to add a small feedback at the bottom, about the chapter and how much you needed to edit, and if the errors were easy to detect or not, etc. 

Once you have finished your edits, please put it in a blog, and send me a link to it, but assuming that I have all of you as my friends, I might already see it in my news feed. You have one week to finish this assignment~ 

The grading goes by how much edits you have done (they must be correct), your feedback, and participation grade. Grades will be out of 50. 

Note: This was my first fanfic meaning, mistkaes are EVERYWHERE. Some of the mistakes are very simple as captilization, but I've grown since then. ^^ I was a rookie who didn't mind grammar, and the proper elements in a good story to be successful. Please enjoy the first chapter, and have fun editing! 

Trainee homework: Assigned on: 3/25/13 Due on: 4/01/13

Henry's P.O.V

I was getting ready to go on a trip with my hyungs to relax for a change. "Henry! Hurry up! Everyone is waiting for you!'' Leeteuk yelled from accross the hall. ''Im comming!" I yelled back. I picked up my bags and trudged to the door.I closed our dorm door and saw Leetuek leaning on the wall "Oh! Leeteuk hyung I thought you went downstairs with the others."

"I was making sure that you didn't hold us up for two hours like you did last time". I remembered that time and smiled when i thought of Leeteuk hyung shaking me awake and throwing clothes into my luggage like a madman. I snapped back into reality when Teukie hyung grabbed one of my bags and started to go down the hall. "wait for me!" i yelled and ran.

When we were downstairs Teukie hyung put all of my bags into the bus.I stepped into the bus and saw the seating arrangements. Leeteuk hyung with Kangin hyung,Donghae and Eunhyuk,Yesung and Ryeowook,and Heechul hyung and Hangeng hyung, Siwon and Kibum,Sungmin and Kyuhyun, and Shindong was in the back sleeping.I looked and saw a hand waving,it was Zhou mi. "Henry! Sit next to me!" I smiled and nodded. I went straight to my seat ad sat down.

"so..where are we going anyways" I asked Zhou mi while pulling out my i-pod and headphones. "Your the one who asked for this trip and yet you dont know?" Zhou mi chuckled and i just stared at him. He noticed me staring at him and knew i wasn't joking and wanted an answer. "uhm..we're going to the beach''.

"The beach?! i haven't been there for a long time!" i yelled almost fangirling. Ryeowook hyung turned and looked at me and said "Henry your really cute when you get excited" i smiled at him and said ''Not as cute as Ryeowook hyung!" I was gonna give him a hug when i felt a hand on my face pushing me away. "Ew Henry..Dont get all mushy on Ryeowook like that".

i looked and saw that it was Kyuhyun was looking at me all disgusted like. Then his expression changed and he hugged Ryeowook hyung and said ''The only person who can hug and be mushy with Ryeowook is me!" Ryeowook had a pleading look in his saying please-get-this-maknae-off-of-me-before-i-bite-him look. I laughed and went back to my i-pod.I still could hear some arguing between Sungmin and Ryeo wook saying whos the cutest and i heard that Sungmin won. I smiled at how my hyungs can actually be childish.Before i could look at my i-pod I heard a loud CRASH! and everything turned black.

The next thing I knew I woke up in a hospital.I tried sitting up but  was overwhemled with dizziness and a slight pain on my back. "Dont try getting up.You'll hurt yourself." i looked to my side and saw Zhou mi sitting up on the bed next to me reading a book. He had a bandage on his head and arm. "Woah! Zhou mi are you ok?" i asked worriedly. 

"Speak for yourself. I only have a few scratches and a sprained arm." he put his book down and stared at me. "How are you feeling Henry?" "Uhmm...Im just dizzy and my back hurts" i replied. "Thats probably from the impact of the crash" "WE HAD A CAR ACCIDENT?!" i almost screamed.

Zhou mi put his two index fingers in his ears "Calm down Henry! Yes,we got into a car crash..why do you think we're in the hospital?" I realized how stupid of a question that was and i tried changing the subject "So..how are the others?" "They're okay..they only have minor scratches and bruises.We can leave the hospital tomorrow." i simply nodded tried getting up again,this time my back didnt hurt as much and the dizziness went away.

"When can we visit the others?" i stared at Zhou mi who right now has all the answers "We can visit them in about an hour or so...go have some rest first then we can visit them." He grabbed his book again and started reading. I pouted but he didnt seem to notice so I decided to get some rest before we visit the hyungs.. I closed my eyes and drifted to sleep.

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