1. Title: 10/10 (Did the title even connect with the story? Is there correct spelling and punctuation marks?)

2. Characterization: 10/10 (Can you tell apart the main characters from the minor? Do the characters have bipolar mood swings?)

3. Grammar: 15/15 (... self explanatory. Did they overdose on those commas or periods?)

4. Flow: 5/5 (did they rush through the story so that they can finally write the main ? Did the characters hook up after only knowing each other for one day?)

5. Plot: 10/10 (Are there 50 different stories just like it?)

 

 

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-Against Me-

 

1) I understand that you don't want to give away to much of the plot and this title is attractive. This title though, I feel that 30% of this title doesn't relate to the story. It is just an opinion even though most of it relates with no grammar and punctuation errors. 8/10.

 

2) The characterisation was detailed and it made sense. Plus, I was able to differentiate the differences between the minor characters and main characters. But I would like it if Jongup's turmoil and feelings before giving Himchan the watch was more detailed since it was part of the main parts. 8/10

 

3) The grammar was almost flawless and I didn't see any mistakes. (Feel free to correct me if I said something wrong) I saw a few awkward sentences. Though it didn't affect the story, it is still there. 13/15

 

4) I think the part where Himchan decided that he would give Jongup a chance was a little rushed because Himchan was supposed to like Sunhwa a lot isn't that right? So for the flow, you got 4/5

 

5) The plot was unique to me as the sentimental value was built on a watch. Watches sometimes have bad meanings if given or gifted in the wrong way. But looking at the story, it was crafted in a way that it was a precious part of their lives/ relationship. I liked how there was a change in the Jongup's personality when there was an intervention between the Jongup and Himchan's relationship. One thing though, the part where Sunhwa was in, I thought that it would be more long winded because a lot of girls don't just give up on their boyfriend that easily. 9/10

 

Overall: 42/50

 

I liked the story and I hope you win for te category :) If there are any questionable points of the review please feel free to point it out ^^