Review for Neuroatypical

 

Title-  10marks
characterization- 10 marks
Grammer- 15 marks
Flow- 5 marks 
Plot- 10 marks
 
Rubrics were given by Channicki
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/352468
-Neuroatypical-
 
 
1) The title was linked to the story and had no punctuation or grammar errors. 10/10
 
2) I like the way the characters are portrayed. Jongup as the shy boy that loves art like most autistic children do and Himchan as the caring, curious and loveable child. As they grew up, Jongup opens up to Himchan and it was cute. The characterisation details were more to Jongup. It still IS great characterisation. 9/10
 
3) There are small mistakes within the conversations and dialogues writing. Other than that, it was pretty much fine. 13/15
 
4) I think the part where Himchan and Jongup grow up, the process was a little too fast for me. It's just a personal opinion because I love detail. 4/5
 
5) I like the plot as it is unique and cute. The progression was a little fast to me but other than that, it was a great plot. With relevant research too. 8/10
 
Firstly, I want to apologise for my lack of research at first. Secondly, you scored 44/50. Thirdly, I enjoyed the story and I wish you good luck in winning for the category of Himchan/member. Fourthly, I hope you write greater stories and have a nice day. 
 
 
 
Thank you for reading.
-Suki
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FancyFeline #1
Actually, "neuroatypical" is a word used by the autistic community to refer to those who suffer from bipolar disorder, ADHD, schizophrenia, circadian rhythm disorders, developmental speech disorders, Parkinson's disease, dyslexia, dyspraxia, etc.

And a third of the people who suffer from autism spectrum disorder also suffer from epilepsy (which causes seizures/convulsions). I would know this because I was epileptic when I was a child and since then I've done my research.

While autism can affect children's ability to socialize, they are still able to make friends, albeit with a little more difficulty.

I didn't post this to attack you or whatever, I just felt that the author deserves a little more credit and respect because she really does know her stuff.
LKyellow #2
While I am aware that this is your opinion, I found your review to be lacking substance and misinformed.
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