Comment/Review on Slave by KatyMikayla
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Posting this here because it's too long to be a comment, lol. xD
I finally finished reading it, and omg I don't even know what to say.
This is such a great story, I don't even know how to describe it asdfghjkl.
Brace yourself for a super long comment/review thingy lol. xD
Anyway, before I start on my word-vomit, I just want to say that I actually prefer over het, and I LOVE angst, so don't bash me if my viewpoints are totally different from yours/everyone else's. xD
First, can I just say how much I love Kiseop in here? Apart from the fact he's my bias in U-Kiss, his character was just so sweet (he was willing to "sacrifice" himself to Seunghyun for Jessica, or when he didn't want to take the painkiller pill, even though he had to give himself to Seunghyun that night, just so Jessica could have it for her cramps), so delicate (omg I just wanted to hug him every time he got jealous, especially when he got heartbroken and attempted suicide and omg I'll talk more about this later), and so...so...omg I don't even know what to say. I just love him so much orz <3 I love how he bears the pain by himself and doesn't show it so that he won't worry those around him. He's so sweet <3
And because I'm a lover, when Jessica "dumped" him, I was all "omg omg omg I love this angst now Seunghyun should take him back and comfort him and asdfghjkl it'll be all angsty and -y!" xD but of course it didn't turn out that way lol. The bits of Vinseop thrown in after that were awesome though, and I seriously started squealing when Seunghyun said he still liked Kiseop. I was like "omg omg yes more drama and hopefully more please I love it when Kiseop bottoms" xD but of course, it didn't turn out like that. again. xD
Oh gosh, the suicide attempt. You seriously gave me a heart-attack! Then it turned out that it was Jessica who got stabbed and I was like "omg omg omg Kiseop and Jessica wtf did you just do" lol. My heart really ached for Kiseop during the suicide attempt though. 3 /hugs Kiseop
Kevin...he's so angelic in real life and then boom! We have a Kevin here xD his character was soooo cute though. xD just that sometimes I get a little irritated with him because he acted immature xD don't worry Kev, I still love you. /bricked
Ooh, I don't know about anyone else, but I really want to have a Vinseop scene where Kevin tops! Kiseop's been teasing him about his size "down there" so much, lol xD like, maybe Kiseop could keep teasing Kevin and he'd be all "I thought I told you to stop... Looks like I'll have to punish you, eh?" xD idk, I guess I just have a preference for bottom!Kiseop. <3 xD
About Seunghyun...well, I kind of hated him at first for hurting poor Kiseop and Kevin so badly (I mean, who didn't, right? xD), but somewhere into the story, I began to like him too. I guess you can call him a tsundere (cold and hostile on the outside but sweet and caring on the inside) lol. I really loved the comfort scenes after Jessica "dumped" Kiseop. <3
Also, him and Sunny's relationship was a nice touch! It really showed more of his gentle and caring side, and some parts really made me smile because they were so sweet. ^^
Eh, I don't really have much to say about Jessica (though she's the main character /bricked), since I don't read het stories much (and so, have little experience with female characters xD). Honestly, I didn't like her at first, because she was so indecisive and kept hurting both Kiseop and Kevin (who is my second favourite in U-Kiss xD). Though, as the story progressed on, I began to like her character more.
The maids...they were really sweet throughout this story. :) I don't really have much to say about them, but I really liked how sweet and caring they were towards everyone else. ^^
Eh, I guess that's it? xD I might add more if I think of more comments later. ^^
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